I rly need to reread some parts bc I'm confused on why Vivians brother is so hostile and against Rozenta and his sister being friends with him/her? And the fact that we finally find out that he's the one who broke into the tower?? Like I get being protective but trying to break in is a step too far of being concerned for your sibling. If he were found out more quickly and Rozenta wasn't as forgiving or busy ATM he would've had so many problems on his hands JUST BECAUSE OF THAT and I doubt his family would take his side for that incident.
I forget how many ppl know about Rozentas family having powers but ik they generally know he/she has magic just not WHAT KIND. I think Vivs brother being a magic "prodigy"/high end magic user has soemthign to do with the fact that he suspects Rozenta for soemthing but there's no other reason to suspect him/her in the story that would drive him to be destructive towards the family tower and leave it damaged. Not to mention the fact that he knew he was high end and probably thought he wouldn't get caught and decided to leave traces of his own magic there.....like girlll
This alpha is such a loserrrrrI've never laughed, side eyed, and facepalmed so hard at an ABO before. I love red hair Shin, what an unbothered King. I'd literally be so embarrassed to even be around alpha ML bc wth and I don't see no one talk8ng about this but the fact that he tried to play it off like Shin liked him when he barely knows him during his heat and the weird vibe he gives when he said there was no point in taking his meds like WHAT ngl that feels so weird of him to just dismiss the fact that he was trying to take care of himself and him playing up that he could ask him for help but not giving him permission until he asked for it. It's a bit icky, heats are diff for each story but if this were a regular comic and he were drunk would it read the same to yall? Bc that whole scenario was mega sus to me. I wanna know more about Shins friend bc she's cute and an alpha, unrequited love? anyways this guy is such a loserrr
As a victim of CSA who once was once in a similar position, you have no idea how much trust Cirrus now has in Skylar, because it is such a hard thing to come to terms with on your own. Much less to share with someone else. I don't think anyone else who hasn't experienced it will fully understand how much faith Cirrus put into Skylar at that moment. To be able to tell him what happened only knowing him for as long as he has speaks volumes on how desperate he is for any connection and really goes to show just how isolated he has been till now. I still haven't told any of my friends about that part of myself and I'm older than him. And I still haven't gotten the help that i know i need yet(though I work on myself as best as i can) but I really hope moving on with the story that he gets the mental help he needs. Healing takes time and it doesn't just all magically go away because you want it to. It's something that stays with you forever and I hope Cirrus gets a good support system in Skylar even if they don't end up together in the end.
Ok so. The translations already make it hard to even figure out whats going on, not even mentioning how you have to piece together the panels and go backup and reread to put together what the convos actually arebut other than that i was really liking this story so far….UP UNTIL THE PART WHERE THE WHITE HAIR BOY HAS A CRUSH ON THE MC?!?! Don’t get me wrong, its adorable on his side since he basically grew up hating her? But lord do i hope that ship never actually happens. HAS EVERYONE FORGOTTEN THAT MC IS AN ADULT?!?! I dont care if she was young when she died, but she has literally outlived generations of the black hair mc like HUHplease tell me you guys are joking with saying that you want those two to end up together. He was literally like 11 when she saved him, i don’t really think his age currently in the story matters bc she basically kept and raised him along with the other kids anwyays. Thats so icky to me. Idk but some of yall are wild with actually shipping that. Everything else in the story has held up fairly but the translations are really killing it for me so im probably gonna drop this since im also seeing ppl say that the White hair boy and MC are endgameanyways. What is everyone elses take on this? Am i the only one that feels uncomfortable with that ship?!!?
Yall tell me why I thought Elco was Ippoli*o father?!?!he has a similar air to the flashback his mother had but then I remembered that he HAS to have some signs of age with how old they are now so it is not. But then i got to thinking because he shares one too many traits with him….what if his father went on to have other children? I mean, it was basically implied that he could possibly still be alive since the mother was forced to stay with the Cardinal. She herself said she “could not go back” so that leads me to believe that he’s still somewhere out there. He probably could not wait for her forever and had his own family as well. Anyways did yall peep the way he got nervous and blushed after interacting with her
Now hold on. Now that the original daughter is here, what changes??!? Legitimate question because the last time we saw her a$$ she was plotting something with those other people that were attacking
Yall i hate thsi site when it comes to comments bc mine always get cut off to only be like three sentences when i have like four paragraphs of venting about the chapters to doi had so much in my comment and for some reason now its gone?!?! This isnt the first time either like huh. Idk if its a bug or it they just dont fully process but my entire comment was posted when it went through and now 4/5 of it is missing









There's so much I wanna say now that I'm rereading this yrs later. Some of the parts that I felt were nuanced are clearer to me now and I understand things better. I wanna analyze some parts that have stood out to me so bad, but my comments always get cut up on here for some reason? (Pls let me know if that happens to any of yall too bc I cannot figure out why it does that, ill write like seven paragraphs and they'll post but when the page reloads it'll be cut into just ONE
See, it literally cut up my comment to just one paragraph how am I gonna do this yall. I think I'll just post my thoughts on tumblr tbh, I just can't deal with the suspense and need to let everyone know my thoughts on some scenes throughout
Never written so long to know
So idk
Have you tried copy pasting it before posting?
Or you can break your comment into parts like you did now ( ̄∇ ̄")
If you can, can you maybe post the link of your work here, would love to read it.