The pacing is pacing. What is this? If the author wanna make PWP (Porn Without Plot) they should just do that, one shots are literally fine. If they wanna make a porn with plot or an actual story, they should make characters we care about and pace this thing much slower because it’s moving in break neck speed rn and I don’t care about these characters AT ALL.
The plot isn’t plotting and because of it the porn isn’t porning, just remove the plot and make fetish content, or just remove some of the sex scene and flesh the plot more. Don’t do it so half assed man.
I honestly understand it for the adults, they’re grown and they should adjust but I don’t think I want the kids to be stuffed with 30 or more adults in one room and expose them to adults fighting and whatever bullshit. At least place the kids in a separate room from the adults.
Anyway, can someone justify his decisions here? I want o know people explaining his actions, I’ll keeep an open mind.
Personally, I think the kids should stay with the parents. If you put kids in a room together, then you also have to provide adult supervision. You cannot trust what other people's intentions are with the kids, specially now that society has collapsed. So the matter of setting up who will protect the kids is an issue itself. Jaehyun could choose vassals for that, but that's not how he should be using his resources right now. Plus, optics-wise, it does not look good to the parents if Jaehyun takes all the kids from them even if its just to put them in a different sleeping arrangement. Why should a parent trust anyone else to take care of their kids in this broken world? The best adults to protect the kids are their parents. And it will continue to be that way until Jaehyun gets enough stability to establish a society where there are rules, roles, and trust for everyone. Right now, Jaehyun is running a refugee center. As the population grows, he'll have to worry more about building a functional society.








Honestly the story isn’t that bad, kinda fast redemption for Cal tho but he got redeemed-ish nonetheless. It’s good and fun enough but it’s pretty ordinary all things considered. It’s kind of like a 7 story wise, not too bad but nothing to write home about.
But for those who get super easily triggered by grape and the very bad power imbalance tho, I warn ya this might not be for you. They did redeem him but imo it’s a tiny bit sloppy.