I thought this was going to be about a mermaid cause of the chapter. And so when I read the first chapter I did not really understand it. But I am glad to have kept reading. This was beautiful. As a reader of bl's there are rarely times where the author will seperete a certain amount/section/chapter toward one character. What I'm trying to say is that I like the way the story switched from one character to another to understand what they felt. And as you read,everything combines causing the piece of information to fit perfectly together. O gosh. This is to much..I just luved this. Felt the need to say this.(▰˘◡˘▰)











I stopped because Riftan kept being a Jerk to her. Haven't read since she was at camp and he found out and after that kept getting upset that she is still doing things he doesn't want her to. Bro let her live her life jeez. Lmk if he still likes this.
yeah hes still like this sadly ╥﹏╥
He’s going to be like this the whole story, and only marginally gets better by the end because he does grow to respect her, but it’s not like, smiling idiot better, don’t hope for that. Come back when it’s done, read in one go the subtle progress will probably be more apparent and the payoff more enjoyable