For a story I don't even remember reading, that was pretty good. Surprisingly it wasn't
super cringe and there were a lot of great and funny moments. Both the male and female characters had depth and personalities, which honestly surprised me the most. It wasnt the best story ive ever read, but I enjoy it, thanks for mass uploading!
I can't express how much I don't care about the Quetta-Celli duo. Wish Jaki and Yen were still here, though I'm sure they'll use Yen as an antagonist a bit later, and I won't care about that too
Why though? Everyone kinda got what they had coming...Jaki trusted the wrong female as his mate to keep his back and met his sad end...As for Yen she only ever cared about her own skin and Quata because she wanted him as a mate...In the face of danger she would flee if not for him only...
Plus Celi and Quata make a fine alpha pair!
As for Yen becoming an antagonist later sounds possible...Actually my guess is she might get with that son from that rival pack...?
But like she gave up on Jaki and run away alone so what could Quata do about her? Especially after he decided to start a pack with Celi... Wolves are monogamous after all...
Ahh I don't mean it in terms of who's good and who's bad, I mean it in the sense of who was interesting and who is not. Jaki and Yen were simply interesting characters and i enjoyed seeing what decisions they would make, whereas Celli and Quetta are literally just cookie cutter, predictable personalities who I don't really care whether they live or die tbh. Jaki was someone you rooted for, and hoped he would live. If these two die next chapter I'd probably be happy that we were getting new MCs
This story is so good, why tf did the author ruin it by having every single one of his daughters be in love with him? And they're all very obviously underage as well?? And they're all basically in "heat" 24/7 over him? Yuck. In addition to that, don't think I didn't notice them kill off every single male guildmaster and leave only the female ones alive wtaf. Really wish they'd drop that gross storyline and just focus on the actual story, there's been too much of this bs in the last 15 or so chapters. Can't imagine anyone wants to see ts
Alon was 15 when he SUPPORT them, let's call it support because he didnt LEGALLY AND PHYSICALLY adopted them. He just gave out gifts, money and letters. And, as the story progress i suppose you had already realize that it's not just his so called daughters but also his so called sons are acting the same thing right? Of course you will say it's different because they are males, yeah, right, stupid they are acting the same but the males think of it different like respect, idolization and ideally. The women thinks the same but they read it differently. Just like how women sometimes assumes pity as love, sorry as love, Greatful as love, idolization as love.
Are we reading the same story??? Do all the children have an obsession with him? Of course. Do the males ask him to marry them and want to fuck him? Absolutely not??? Do the males make "hentai" faces of pure ecstasy whenever the MC praises them or gives them attention? Absolutely not.
You know, criticising a female character because they're portrayed as brainless women who can't think straight around MC and need to breed him actually isn't an attack of women. Sorry that I want them to be an equal and actually have a singular thought for themselves, similar to the aqua-dude, who's a mental case, but is a reliable and sensible person (and doesn't bust a load when MC breathes in his direction). Similar to the sword-dude who would also do anything for MC and doesn't shut up about him, but isn't gross or weird about it (also doesn't bust a fat one). It's actually really Interesting, because they're portrayed as smart masterminds, but then when it comes to MC himself everyone's tripping over themselves and acting a fool just for a crumb of attention, even ignoring the consent of the MC (see beastkin). Sure if only ONE female character was like that it would be like, okay one of them developed a fkd up attachment, sure, but it's literally every single female character he comes into contact with (especially all 3 children!!). Just silliness










Thank God they didn't draw out the children pecking order fights, since it's obviously not even a competition. Really enjoying the direction this is going in even though nothing much has happened yet, and super happy for flower dude for finding something he's good at