it's really disappointing how many authors can't seem to portray a tense, "enemies to lovers" dynamic without resorting to deadass r4pe.
It’s really so normalized in yaoi stories. I wonder why.
ok tbh i thought Jaekyung was going to have a bigger reaction, and the fact he is suspicious of Dan isn't that strange either. He's not aware of his feelings, so for all he knows Dan's loyalty is only granted by the money he gives him. If we add the fact that he saw him with the other team's coach, and the possibility of there being a spy...it'd kinda make sense. (he's still a piece of trash and I wish Dan could just leave )
this is a thriller fr, every chapter i read i get more anxious
nah fr
when it's all said and done i really feel like there was no need to add cain to this story, or at least to push that "past life" narrative. and don't get me wrong, i liked cain far more than i like yahwi, but really what was the reason??
Agreed, they only used him to push the other two together. Like, I understand the whole "you gotta love yourself first before loving someone else" kinda message they were trying to pass with Cain, but they did my baby dirty. He is my fav and he deserved so much better than that. I hope we'll get to see him having the best life ever with someone that loves him truly, cuz if not Im flipping the fucking table （/TДT)/
Exactly what I said. Cain couldve been amazing in a story on his own.
Definitely! Gosh, now I wish we could have a side story dedicated just to him!
...he's literally just a brat with a degradation kink
this is how you write enemies to lovers