Mc just went in the carriage with the guy who tried to physically assault her just because... Because she suddenly thought that it was alright? With is going on there! It's bad as a smut and as a story.
Mc doesn't react or care about anything, so why we as a reader should empathize the situation and the characters? Very boring.
So you don't have a brain OR eyes? What an absolute moron
@kuinmelen this is the funniest and stupidest comment i've read this month i'm at a loss for words
Everything happens so quickly. The story feels like a total horror with too much things going in, yet at the same time I feel like no one reacting or addressing the events properly. It's like too brief, I don't know.
All the characters here are just a bit crazy too.
A bit not my cup of tea. The biggest importance of the plot focuses on just how much mc like her father, but we know almost nothing about the dude. Her constant simping feels weird, and the moment when father beaten the child and mc was thinking only about how cute her father is at that moment? I don't know, just rubs me the wrong way.
The ending is very rushed with no proper character development whatsoever, which is indeed very sad.
The art is really pretty, but the story feels so boring and dragging. They add a lot of details, but it doesn't make the world more complicated or full, quite the opposite. The amount of details creates plot holes and the feeling that the characters had resources to succeed but don't do it just because. Indeed sad thing considering that the concept itself quite interesting.
Yea, I just wish they would do a time skip or something.. maybe a separation and reunion arch for MC and Rio too, but It really does just keep dragging
Mc 17 and the ml is 50 yo with 3 kids. Two of the said kids constantly bully mc, as well as the maids constantly go against her, yet mc does nothing. It feels like a story about poor young gal that needs big strong man to help her, which is truly a poor writing and just uninteresting plot.
I don't think you fully grasp the situation FL has been forced into. She is well aware that she is NOT their mother, who only died 6 months ago mind you, and doesn't have the clout in that STRANGER'S house to do anything. She's the new wife, sure, but her husband isn't home to reinforce her authority. It's like adopting a second cat. The 1st one is likely NOT going to like the second for awhile. And an absent owner? That's a recipie for disaster.
She isn't doing nothing. She's a 17 y/o girls who just had her fiance die and was forced into a new marriage. She's desperately trying to figure out how to slot herself into this new dynamic.
Yvette is perfectly capable without a man saving her. Dismissing her character because she's demure at the start, in essentially enemy territory w/o any support, is a disservice to her efforts.
Tldr: Give Yvette time to find her footing. The story is still just starting out.