Mc 17 and the ml is 50 yo with 3 kids. Two of the said kids constantly bully mc, as well as the maids constantly go against her, yet mc does nothing. It feels like a story about poor young gal that needs big strong man to help her, which is truly a poor writing and just uninteresting plot.
Mc just went in the carriage with the guy who tried to physically assault her just because... Because she suddenly thought that it was alright? With is going on there! It's bad as a smut and as a story.
Mc doesn't react or care about anything, so why we as a reader should empathize the situation and the characters? Very boring.
Everything happens so quickly. The story feels like a total horror with too much things going in, yet at the same time I feel like no one reacting or addressing the events properly. It's like too brief, I don't know.
All the characters here are just a bit crazy too.
A bit not my cup of tea. The biggest importance of the plot focuses on just how much mc like her father, but we know almost nothing about the dude. Her constant simping feels weird, and the moment when father beaten the child and mc was thinking only about how cute her father is at that moment? I don't know, just rubs me the wrong way.
The ending is very rushed with no proper character development whatsoever, which is indeed very sad.
The art is really pretty, but the story feels so boring and dragging. They add a lot of details, but it doesn't make the world more complicated or full, quite the opposite. The amount of details creates plot holes and the feeling that the characters had resources to succeed but don't do it just because. Indeed sad thing considering that the concept itself quite interesting.
The art is really pretty, but the story feels so boring and dragging. They add a lot of details, but it doesn't make the world more complicated or full, quite the opposite. The amount of details creates plot holes and the feeling that the characters had resources to succeed but don't do it just because. Indeed sad thing considering that the concept itself quite interesting.
CONTENT WARNING: Child Abuse...
- Author: Hyedoll
- Genres: Webtoons / Shoujo / Fantasy
The art is pretty, but the story is very boring










