FINALLY!!! a ~shred~ of development lol
(referring to literally only the last panel)
Dennis wears fitted pants at the party but in the sex scenes he’s naked except for his shoes and socks… you’re gonna tell me the author just glossed over the world’s unsexiest wet pants dance that would have had to happen to deliberately take off a pair of pants without taking off the shoes? You’re gonna tell me they weren’t flapping around and falling over struggling to take their wet clothes off over their shoes? I’m over here cackling
I fucking love you….this is so funny to think about. And the line “Dennis wears fitted pants to the party” IS SO GOOD GAHAHA
this got me laughing almost hysterically Thank you
everyone talking bout orgies, meanwhile I am flabbergasted by him casually opening the mail???? am I insane?? I would hate if someone did that
i… i hate this. no shade to ppl who love plotless smut (i do too!!) but UGHHH, this particular story is so tiring somehow
couldnt agree more
not to be a hater but I felt like this story was missing so much. even a basic plot like this can be done in a riveting way, and it just wasn’t. there was zero emotional depth. art was promising but this was basically just nonstop smut that was intended to be hot but the backstory was underdeveloped and lacked the nuance and pining and anticipation that would make it actually hot and therefore genuinely satisfying to read. it wasn’t the worst thing I’ve ever read but it’s kind of “go on girl, give us nothing!!”
I agree by the last chapter I was like, are we done yet?