aside from any actual flawed plot devices that im not knowledgable enough about to name, i feel like the reason it feels dry is bc they got together so quickly we all love a good falling in love arc and they started dating before we got to see it. I think rn they’re focused on the d/s attraction and the falling in love will maybe come later
Idk why but this story is a little dry..
aside from any actual flawed plot devices that im not knowledgable enough about to name, i feel like the reason it feels dry is bc they got together so quickly we all love a good falling in love arc and they started dating before we got to see it. I think rn they’re focused on the d/s attraction and the falling in love will maybe come later