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This story was a great read for what it was… There was barely any chapters. Which is how it usually is with these smutty black and white books but although I liked the idea of the trainer later on being his teacher just wish we saw more of the development of love between the two and some more training before jumping into the traditional copycat yaoi storyline and having the uke and the seme fall in love right away. Otherwise, it was good!
I genuinely HATE how there was rape! And the fact that the ukes always succumb to it almost immediately and fall in love. I liked the storyline of him being Ryo from when he was younger I think the delivery of that was amazing !