This story was a great read for what it was… There was barely any chapters. Which is how it usually is with these smutty black and white books but although I liked the idea of the trainer later on being his teacher just wish we saw more of the development of love between the two and some more training before jumping into the traditional copycat yaoi storyline and having the uke and the seme fall in love right away. Otherwise, it was good!
I loved how there wasn’t any unnecessary drama, loved the plot.. Well what there was of plot. I think the two paired really well together and the author did a great job at creating a yaoi that isn’t toxic which we yaoi readers don’t get very often. I would love to see more of cross dressing seme x regular uke or maybe even cross dressing seme x cross dresssing uke? Idk, both would be super enjoyable reads in my opinion. Loved this one! ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
So because you’ve just been raped by this psychopathic man who’s been stalking you for years now, you’re going to do him the favor of pleasuring him out of.. Rage? I have no clue what I’ve just read, but it was insanity. Honestly. Whatever happened to bringing law into situations like these? The Uke is very annoying and very insane, the Seme is just stupid because it’s going to be like an enemies to lovers when what the Uke is doing is literally CRIMINAL!!! Like victim x crazy much? But, also, I feel so bad for blondie. She is too pretty and too sweet, why the fuck would Uke do that? Super fucking weird to call some innocent woman over to show you having sex infront of her… I don’t know (⊙…⊙ )
Whoever the fuck uploaded this sucks ass. In chapter two or one they fucking made it blur.
Asking for high quality works on illegal website is crazy , be grateful someone's out there providing things for you to see for free , ungrateful asf
I’m allowed to because if you’re going to do that don’t fucking post it??? It’s free to post like hello? Of course I’m going to ask for high quality just don’t post if you’re going to do crap like that. Ungrateful asf? Bby so r you, we have the option to purchase this from the original creators and we are abusing that option by looking online what you said is so contradictory…. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
We're not in the same boat , I've done purchased several chapters on legal website to support the author that i like even when i finished reading the illegal version first , and I'm very grateful so yes , instead of yapping go purchase the chappies to support the author
If i purchase the story I’ll let you borrow my account. I don’t get how others complain when people point out things like a blurry chapter because if we’re really pointing fingers we’re all EQUALLY wrong for reading on an illegal website. I don’t get what’s wrong with you saying that if you’re gonna post a shitty upload just don’t upload at all.
Okay and if we’re not in the same boat who are you to call me ungrateful? Like clearly you done read it up on here too df. It’s not a crime to be mad someone posted a blurry ass chapter when they purchase it themselves why not post a good one if ur gonna post it on an illegal web anyway? Make it make sense….
Thank you I don’t understand what’s wrong with it either when there’s an issue I think it only makes sense to point it out???
No I feel you. Like yes we’re grateful when someone picks up a story and takes time to upload it here, but if its the type of upload where it’s blurry and stuff, then that beats the purpose of an upload in general. Atp we’re better off reading the raws and translating it ourselves.
wait did you not read the official chapters or did you read the fan translations
So, this had more stories then I expected I had expected just one. By “lots” I just mean more then I had been prepared for as I only prepared for one. This was cute, I think it’s very old and may have been when yaoi when first starting out just because of the art style and I can see this book being a paperback. Well? I think it’s nice. I wouldn’t say it’s “bad” but I don’t think I can say I loved it or would read it again just for funsos. Would recommend if you’re just starting out and want a good first impression of yaoi, or if you like art styles such as this.
There’s so many things wrong about this.. if anyone says “well you chose to read it…” yes, I did, I had to hope for the best HOWEVER, the description never mentioned anything about seme looking creepy as hell like a Killer Stalking character, or being scary as fuck like drugging him and turning his dick into a pussy while their all alone at the school at night? Literally a horror book at this point. Also, skipped to the last chapter why the fuck didn’t he ever give him back his dick? Why why they in love? Why did the uke just accept his fate for that assholes dick? Almost every yaoi love story has that sort of vibe of dynamic, stupid uke, rapist/toxic/everything bad seme. Just don’t get it. Well, anyways, I genuinely hated this. I have got to stop hoping for the best. I’m a little upset because this is the fourth BL I’ve read tonight and they’ve all sucked so far, more then less having to skip through every chapter adding them to the read… ☹ well, thanks for letting me know not to read this or recommend it.
-Ho
Not read boy meets girl from the same author. Same plot different characteristics of the people
Don't read boy meets girl from the same author. Same plot different characteristics of the people
I suggest you to read nerd project, it will make you feel better about BLs, I swear
Just going to add this to my already read list because I’m not even sure I WANT to read the rest of the chapters off of INKR. I don’t know, there’s so many things frustrating me about this. It’s okay. 7/10, I like the heaviness of the heart.
I just feel like this is really unrealistic, why most yaoi stories are, I just feel like this one was really weird like it felt out of place the way the characters spoke, I feel like no one would actually say those things. And also he asked him to randomly help him with his erectile dysfunction out of nowhere, which was weird that he said he had quote on quote “no one else” I don’t know. Just seemed weird like the uke was plotting on him the whole time but we don’t see that. Anyways, I don’t see why a playboy would just say yes, I mean I get it but at the same time… I don’t really. I don’t know, just wasn’t a huge fan of this. It’s okay. I can’t tell if I really liked it or didn’t.
Girl it’s porn
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY U'RE SO RIGHT BUT THIS REPLY TOOK ME OUT
It is, but it should at least hold an applicable plot. Might as well out the dialogue and do mindless smut.
im fuckin dead
to be fair, yaoi is usually porn without or w/ little to no plot (especially in mangas with little amount of chapters). I'm pretty sure this was made without the purpose to be anything amazing plotwise and moreso focused on dynamics and smut, explaining why it's so fast paced and barely having intent behind the actions of the characters.
Character complexity was most likely not taken to accountability. Because as what I've noticed in short yaoi mangas like these, male characters are often objectified and static rather than molded into the potential of what character depth they could've had
If you want yaoi with good character writing, smut, and plot, I can recommend you some
Yes, I was hoping for something more shocking and interesting rather then just smut, I would appreciate some recommendations I always pick based off of pictures and just think it’ll be good for some reason.
Character dynamics focus (light plot)
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/sign_language/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/a_barbershop_quartet/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/spinach_bouquet/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/tractor_full_of_love/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/i_ship_my_rival_x_me/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/faded_first_love/
with compelling Plot & smut
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/love_in_orbit/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/alien_in_my_closet/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/mo_dao_zu_shi_novel/ (smut on another link)
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_man_who_can_t_taste/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/kimi_no_yoru_ni_fureru/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/dead_or_alive/
these r pretty good
Wow, I’ll have to check those out (⌒▽⌒) thank you so much!
I genuinely HATE how there was rape! And the fact that the ukes always succumb to it almost immediately and fall in love. I liked the storyline of him being Ryo from when he was younger I think the delivery of that was amazing !