So because you’ve just been raped by this psychopathic man who’s been stalking you for years now, you’re going to do him the favor of pleasuring him out of.. Rage? I have no clue what I’ve just read, but it was insanity. Honestly. Whatever happened to bringing law into situations like these? The Uke is very annoying and very insane, the Seme is just stupid because it’s going to be like an enemies to lovers when what the Uke is doing is literally CRIMINAL!!! Like victim x crazy much? But, also, I feel so bad for blondie. She is too pretty and too sweet, why the fuck would Uke do that? Super fucking weird to call some innocent woman over to show you having sex infront of her… I don’t know (⊙…⊙ )
Whoever the fuck uploaded this sucks ass. In chapter two or one they fucking made it blur.
I’m allowed to because if you’re going to do that don’t fucking post it??? It’s free to post like hello? Of course I’m going to ask for high quality just don’t post if you’re going to do crap like that. Ungrateful asf? Bby so r you, we have the option to purchase this from the original creators and we are abusing that option by looking online what you said is so contradictory…. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
If i purchase the story I’ll let you borrow my account. I don’t get how others complain when people point out things like a blurry chapter because if we’re really pointing fingers we’re all EQUALLY wrong for reading on an illegal website. I don’t get what’s wrong with you saying that if you’re gonna post a shitty upload just don’t upload at all.
Okay and if we’re not in the same boat who are you to call me ungrateful? Like clearly you done read it up on here too df. It’s not a crime to be mad someone posted a blurry ass chapter when they purchase it themselves why not post a good one if ur gonna post it on an illegal web anyway? Make it make sense….
So, this had more stories then I expected I had expected just one. By “lots” I just mean more then I had been prepared for as I only prepared for one. This was cute, I think it’s very old and may have been when yaoi when first starting out just because of the art style and I can see this book being a paperback. Well? I think it’s nice. I wouldn’t say it’s “bad” but I don’t think I can say I loved it or would read it again just for funsos. Would recommend if you’re just starting out and want a good first impression of yaoi, or if you like art styles such as this.
There’s so many things wrong about this.. if anyone says “well you chose to read it…” yes, I did, I had to hope for the best HOWEVER, the description never mentioned anything about seme looking creepy as hell like a Killer Stalking character, or being scary as fuck like drugging him and turning his dick into a pussy while their all alone at the school at night? Literally a horror book at this point. Also, skipped to the last chapter why the fuck didn’t he ever give him back his dick? Why why they in love? Why did the uke just accept his fate for that assholes dick? Almost every yaoi love story has that sort of vibe of dynamic, stupid uke, rapist/toxic/everything bad seme. Just don’t get it. Well, anyways, I genuinely hated this. I have got to stop hoping for the best. I’m a little upset because this is the fourth BL I’ve read tonight and they’ve all sucked so far, more then less having to skip through every chapter adding them to the read… ☹ well, thanks for letting me know not to read this or recommend it.
-Ho
I just feel like this is really unrealistic, why most yaoi stories are, I just feel like this one was really weird like it felt out of place the way the characters spoke, I feel like no one would actually say those things. And also he asked him to randomly help him with his erectile dysfunction out of nowhere, which was weird that he said he had quote on quote “no one else” I don’t know. Just seemed weird like the uke was plotting on him the whole time but we don’t see that. Anyways, I don’t see why a playboy would just say yes, I mean I get it but at the same time… I don’t really. I don’t know, just wasn’t a huge fan of this. It’s okay. I can’t tell if I really liked it or didn’t.
to be fair, yaoi is usually porn without or w/ little to no plot (especially in mangas with little amount of chapters). I'm pretty sure this was made without the purpose to be anything amazing plotwise and moreso focused on dynamics and smut, explaining why it's so fast paced and barely having intent behind the actions of the characters.
Character complexity was most likely not taken to accountability. Because as what I've noticed in short yaoi mangas like these, male characters are often objectified and static rather than molded into the potential of what character depth they could've had
If you want yaoi with good character writing, smut, and plot, I can recommend you some
Character dynamics focus (light plot)
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/sign_language/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/a_barbershop_quartet/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/spinach_bouquet/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/tractor_full_of_love/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/i_ship_my_rival_x_me/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/faded_first_love/
with compelling Plot & smut
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/love_in_orbit/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/alien_in_my_closet/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/mo_dao_zu_shi_novel/ (smut on another link)
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_man_who_can_t_taste/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/kimi_no_yoru_ni_fureru/
https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/dead_or_alive/
these r pretty good
This was not great, overall. Got through about three panels and had to skip read the rest because it was too hard to comprehend as to of why someone would write this exactly. I don’t hate the overall characters and art, but the trauma and becoming a masochist from it? That’s where it first got me, then not only that, but the masochist in this couldn’t even hold a single regular conversation without creeping on the main character. Very weird, very off. And, there’s tons of rape. This should’ve been mindless smut to be honest, because most of the dialogue sucked ass and didn’t add up. Also, why did the main character get raped and be perfectly “fine” with it? This is one thing that always happens in YAOIS where they always blush whenever reminded me of being RAPED. I don’t know, very stereotypical story that I wish I didn’t read. I can’t describe in words how many problems there are with this.
I honestly like this and the concept is really great, none of the characters are toxic towards one another and they both seem to be interested. The age gap doesn’t concern me, they’re both adults. Feeling a little bad for uke because that pink lighter is really confusing, I just know they’re going to fight and make up like every yaoi love story. So curious to see if he IS apart of a gang? Or running one? I do cringe at the parts where he calls him “master” sometimes, but that was only in the first episode really where he had to tell him to call him master and say he was powerful or something along those lines. But, overall I think it’s really cute and kinky.









Ahjussi is really freaky … ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~