Dohyon's Topics (15)

Thank you again dohyon for the update!! Ur a HEROOOOO (｡♡‿♡｡)(☆▽☆)

awww , thank you very much , hope ur enjoying the chapters (●'◡'●)ﾉ (=・ω・=) ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶(▰˘◡˘▰)(⌒▽⌒) ╮(￣▽￣)╭

oh , my orange hearts disapeared lol , i added 3 of em lmao

I do enjoy it a lot and waiting for more (◕ᴗ◕✿) please dont stop updating ( ꈍᴗꈍ)(≧▽≦)

OF COURSE , I WILL NOT STOP TILL IT'S FINISHED (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ヾ(☆▽☆) （/TДT)/ (●'◡'●)ﾉ ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ ╮(￣▽￣)╭ and ur welcome :3

Awww so sweet of you (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦) now i think im having a crush on u (๑♡⌓♡๑) kidding

heh , lel , i apreciate it XD (⌒▽⌒) ╮(￣▽￣)╭ ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

Ack! Looks like I got rejected from my confession (╥﹏╥)

awww (づ￣ ³￣)づ we can be frens ╮(￣▽￣)╭ (●'◡'●)ﾉ ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~ (=・ω・=)

I'm insta following you queen/king.

yeah sure we can, it started with friends anyway (｡•ᴗ-)♡

thank you :3 (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ლ(´ڡ`ლ) ╮(￣▽￣)╭

I LOVE IT!!!ヾ(☆▽☆)

awww , thank you awww (づ￣ ³￣)づ(▰˘◡˘▰) (●'◡'●)ﾉ , new chapter today - tommorow btw !!! managed to translate half a chapter by now today only lol <3

ig depends on if i have energy or not lol (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

Thank you for the update!
♡(*˘︶˘*)~｡.:*♡

Thank you for uploading the chapter!

This is Machine translated isn't it ? Because a lot of stuff make absolutely no sense at all. Some texts aren't in right bubble, sentences makes no sense. Is there a proof reader in your "team"?
I have nothing against you or anyone doing these but please proofread them at least. It just not enjoyable to read, I had to stop reading mid way.

everything is in the right bubbles actually and i do everything myself and i also proof read it QUITE ALOT , i do all this on my android phone and it's a fan translation , some mistakes are bound to exist , and i edit a ton of the bubbles backround and you can't even see it ... , i know japanese to a preety good extent too and i always take my time to translate to the best of my ability , what do you mean by machine translated ? :'/ bruh ur so rude wtf , like ... i know it's not perfect , but it's really well done ... i read it like 50 + times myself and verified if i translated right myself even more times , i do use many translator sites to see diff sentences if i end up not understanding some , but i understand 98% of what i hear in japanese , while there may be like 3 or 4 mistakes , i am 98% sure everything is very well translated , also i know what you mean about some bubbles , but that's literally where the text was in japanese ... so i just kept the text where it originally was Σ(っ°Д °;)っ it took me like 4 consecutive days of work to translate this ... thank you for your oppinion ig ... , if you don't like it , you could also make it yourself like how i took up after the absolutely horendous 10 chapters uploaded before that probably had ai in them ...

thank you ╥﹏╥ in a few hours i'll start translating the next one , i uploaded this one at like ifk 5 in the morning ? so i might still need some rest , sorry abt that ... ╮(￣▽￣)╭ (●'◡'●)ﾉ (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ i promise the next chapter will be even better !!!

ly guyz ╥﹏╥(๑•ㅂ•)و✧ (●'◡'●)ﾉ ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~(≧∀≦) ┗( T﹏T )┛ hope you enjoyed it and i will bring the next chapter as soon as i can (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

I can help if u need a cleaner and proof reader, sorry u had to hear that, thank you for your hard work. ♡´･ᴗ･`♡

awww , ur so niceee , but nah , it takes too much time to do this , i don't want to burden people since i took this up myself , i guess i gotta try even harder Σ( ￣□￣||) ┗( T﹏T )┛ (●'◡'●)ﾉ i apreciate every good comment crumb , thank you man , thank you Carsien ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~ ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ (≧∀≦)(๑•ㅂ•)و✧ ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ (●'◡'●)ﾉ (づ￣ ³￣)づ(▰˘◡˘▰)

i really apreciate it , so you know (●'◡'●)ﾉ (▰˘◡˘▰) ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ ur da goat XD :3 :D

This isn't the type answer I was expecting but hey.
I do understand that you put effort but I think you need to learn to take feedback from those who'll read your work, even if they're negative or you may not like or it can hurt, and maybe look at what you did again instead of being defensive. No, I'm not being rude, I only express my experience will reading. Always expecting positive feedback when thing aren't good, won't do any good.

Well, good on you if its machine translation, but you still do use web-translators(machine) to checks mistakes(I did not say translation but mistakes, even if the overall feels like that) but that doesn't mean there isn't any. Sometimes, you need an outsider(human, not yourself) to see mistakes you didn't notice, and check if things make sense (thus the need of a proofreader).
About the text in bubbles, sometimes you need to adapt it to the language of translation (the texts order, otherwise the texts won't make sense, that is the case in some pages in your translation).

And don't worry, since my experience wasn't enjoyable, I will not engage any further, and I haven't read the ones before yours either. So I'll do as I've always done, "read" available raw chapters and wait for a proper, readable translation.

One last thing, I think you should consider trying some other text fonts.

Anyway, good luck to you.

edit: Cannot edit previous reply. So edit here.
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Well, good on you if it isn't* machine translation...
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you won't be missed ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Yohhh dont apologize! You dont owe anyone here, making the effort to translate and upload it is already enough. Rest as much as u need coz health is important (◠‿◕) and dont mind the rude comments (づ￣ ³￣)づ

awww , thank you , ya , lol i have a headche rn , but i also want to tackle the next chapter as soon as i can , it has something interesting (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ (●'◡'●)ﾉ u so nice , i apreciate it !!! (▰˘◡˘▰)(▰˘◡˘▰)ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

Which chapter did you think was their work? Cos for a sec I tought they did the sideways ones since I started reading the manga today, but they only did the ones after the sideway ones and did a much better job with them. The sideways chapters are pretty sure they are machine translated and very annoying to read but their work was much better, no glaring error either that broke my reading to think "what does this mean" like before their translations.

Are you referring to shion12's translations? Dohyon's are mostly readable to me, unlike the shion12 chapters (where the text is sideways and don't make sense most of the time)

Thank you for your hard work ヾ(☆▽☆)

(●'◡'●)ﾉ e he , i will soon start translating the next one , just need a bit of air , cuz mid translation i don't really take breaks

and ur welcome (▰˘◡˘▰)

Awwwn don't forget to take care of yourself aswell

lel , thanks , but ik how much we want the next chapters so i when i make them i wanna finish as fast as possible and as effective as possible (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

I love you

thank you for your kind words ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~