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Yumi June 8, 2026 2:11 am

"I should have said it back then" Jay.. I love you but you said the same thing 40 chapters ago and we are still in the loop without going to the main conflict. Even a new brand troublemaker girl is showing up and she just dissapeared again. Taeha, my manchild, I know you are a typical chaebol that loves to see the city of Seoul from far away and say " Everything is according to my plan" but sweety at this point you are just corny as hell. If I was you, I would stop seeing the city of Seoul and spend time with my woman who is anxious as hell.

Haesoo, forget about everyone and find a fine gentleman or a woman who makes you feel safe. But what the hell wih feeling old?? Girl.. Taylor swift was your age when she broke up with her boyfriend and currently she's in her prime.. Shakira?? .. All the korean dramas, the Female Leads are in their mid thirties and the actresses are in their forties. Come on, just enjoy being single.

Super funny that the author is aware that Taeha is obsessed with Mincheol, like the rest of the characters and readers. Author, just make it a BL, or GL. I'll support you if you do that. I would love this kind of comic it if I was in my teenns or entering my 20, but now it's cringe

Yumi May 17, 2026 3:22 am

Overexplaining a story—often called "exposition dumping" or "telling instead of showing"—happens when an author provides unnecessary details the audience can already infer, occurs when an author provides too much background information, world-building, or character history at once. This often slows the pacing and breaks audience immersion, famously referred to as an "info-dump"

Explaining too much rather than letting the story speak for itself, damages reader trust because it spoon-feeds the audience and halts narrative momentum.
Overdone monologues that overexplain story themes are a classic symptom of "clunky exposition". Result in Kills the Pace: Explaining halts the forward momentum of the plot in favor of static exposition.

    Whipped For Josuke May 17, 2026 4:55 am

    for real, this all could've been explained in one chapter instead of making a whole arc of it

    Yumi May 17, 2026 6:09 am
    for real, this all could've been explained in one chapter instead of making a whole arc of it Whipped For Josuke

    Multiple arcs repeating the same information over and over again and adding just a couple panels with new information

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