The last two chapters were good, I was feeling that if see Taeha with another inner monologue saying the same shit in the bridge of Seoul or in a dark alley I was about to pluck my hair. Or Mincheol with his inner monologues about how much he wants to humiliate Haesoo, it was enough. Does the author know of any other female stereotype besides the pathetic clingy woman with no self-respect? Why the author introduces multiple women thirsty for Taeha? but otherwise this wattpadd level thing is not as bad as other wattpad things I read
Gurrllll!! You said in ch 42 that you wouldn't let LOVE to destroy you, we cheered! but you have been thrashed like a fucking beyblade for the next 70 episodes.
what just happened? The only plot that the author can think is introducing a new girl to make her insecure... again..???
Blonde old classmate--- Haesoo saw her with Taeha and pushed him away.
Florist girl---- Haesoo saw her talking with Taeha and pushed him away.
Random street 'Tarot' girl--- Haesoo saw her with Taeha and almost pushed him away.
Little girl kid--- Haesoo saw Taeha playing with the little girl and pushed him away.
Secretary girl--- Haesoo saw her talking with him and pushed him away.
Bakery girl---- Talked about an age gap relationship and Haesoo decided to push him away.
Reporter girl--- Guess what?
I can think in other 10 problems that a woman in their 30's could have and can be part of the main story.
All the girls introduced, even the random extras . No woman has self respect...no single one? I wonder if the author liked early 2000's shoujo mangas where all the women are super clingy for a man who is zero interested in them. And now the new girls are fighting for Mincheol?? really?? is the only stereotype for a woman that the author can think of?
I admit that Haesoo is having just a bit self respect for not calling back Mincheol. And the random secretary, she's just doing what she's paid for
In 100 chapters, Kyoko already participated as stunt double, worked in one advertisement ,and was casted in her first drama and she is the queen of slow romance. Fruits basket way more. Is this becoming a Shounen? Did someone write my name in the death note?
"I should have said it back then" Jay.. I love you but you said the same thing 40 chapters ago and we are still in the loop without going to the main conflict. Even a new brand troublemaker girl is showing up and she just dissapeared again. Taeha, my manchild, I know you are a typical chaebol that loves to see the city of Seoul from far away and say " Everything is according to my plan" but sweety at this point you are just corny as hell. If I was you, I would stop seeing the city of Seoul and spend time with my woman who is anxious as hell.
Haesoo, forget about everyone and find a fine gentleman or a woman who makes you feel safe. But what the hell wih feeling old?? Girl.. Taylor swift was your age when she broke up with her boyfriend and currently she's in her prime.. Shakira?? .. All the korean dramas, the Female Leads are in their mid thirties and the actresses are in their forties. Come on, just enjoy being single.
Super funny that the author is aware that Taeha is obsessed with Mincheol, like the rest of the characters and readers. Author, just make it a BL, or GL. I'll support you if you do that. I would love this kind of comic it if I was in my teenns or entering my 20, but now it's cringe
Overexplaining a story—often called "exposition dumping" or "telling instead of showing"—happens when an author provides unnecessary details the audience can already infer, occurs when an author provides too much background information, world-building, or character history at once. This often slows the pacing and breaks audience immersion, famously referred to as an "info-dump"
Explaining too much rather than letting the story speak for itself, damages reader trust because it spoon-feeds the audience and halts narrative momentum.
Overdone monologues that overexplain story themes are a classic symptom of "clunky exposition". Result in Kills the Pace: Explaining halts the forward momentum of the plot in favor of static exposition.
for real, this all could've been explained in one chapter instead of making a whole arc of it
Multiple arcs repeating the same information over and over again and adding just a couple panels with new information
Author: What kind of ML trope should I have in my comic? The biker bad boy, The edgy boy that doesn't talk, the gangster ML or the CEO ML?
Editor: Yes
u forgot to mention body built like double door fridge
Lmaoo
╥﹏╥ I need a warm chocolate after this