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the scene at te hospital when kim dan is conscious is a bit cringe, I mean, let me see the hurt jjk is going through because he found out it was his fault, dont let me know by someone else telling it (╯°Д °)╯╧╧. Show, don't tell, yk. JJK is finally lookig rough, I waited for this look on him since ch 1 and finally we're here, author san pls let him stay like that for some time before they reconciliate pls, let him sufferrrrr. Btw, the fact kim dan doesn't know how jjk's hand feel at this point in the storyis pretty strange, jjk really used his hands on kim dan, iykwim. Well, we'll see though, it feels a bit empty