so i finished the novel this entire week and im very surprised to report that grayson and dane's story/characters were written so much better than kiss me if you can. i used to dislike grayson myself and thought he was just a pos. while im no expert about this entire series, i do feel the author's writing gap from kiss me if you can and desire me if you can, this one with more fleshed out and nuanced writing. throw tomatoes or wtv, but i enjoyed this a lot more
This is basically what early novel readers are trying to say lol. But many people are not understanding that not likable character doesnt equal bad story. And the writing gap you feel is because dmiyc is the first story in this omegaverse the author conceptualized, even before kiss me liar or kimyc. She takes a lot of time developing the story before launch and it definitely shows in the quality.
The novel is here: https://oceanstale.com/desire-me-if-you-can/desire-me-if-you-can/
The reading order is up to you as all the novels re-explain the world view in their story
while we're here lets give a HUGE THANKS to the translator for doing a great job from start to finish and updating us so fast every time ! <3 also please support the author by buying the original chapters in ridibooks, etc. you can find the official links in the author's twitter/x acc @yeatakoo ! and remember DONT post screenshots of the fan translations in public ty!! let's all gracefully wait for S2 to come







crying I'll miss them so much