I kind of like that both main characters are messed up in their own ways, it’s why they’re drawn to each other. They mirror each other. Also, the seme is undeniably in love with the uke, I think it’s a mix of obsession and love. He’s unhinged so it definitely comes off as like a drug addiction except he’s obsessed with the boy instead. In conclusion, they both need help and one needs to soften up and admit he’s more than just having “fun”.
I mean at least for the most part the uke seems to have some type of pushback and isn’t super useless but he’s omega so the alpha uses it to r word him over and over and it’s soooo unpleasant. You know he can’t pinpoint his cycle and he has trouble with it. You basically blackmailed him into living with you AND marrying you AND YOU’RE TREATING THE PERSON WHO HAS YOUR CHILD LILE THIS??? You’re r wording them and making them feel like trash??? Wtf. I do not like the alpha at all and NOTHING will redeem him. Dude is proud to be a predator. Most do these stories are like this, same storyline.
It's weird too cuz has Ian always been like this?!?
Then wtf did Noah even like him in the first place?!?
He's so desperate to see him one last time and for what?!? What kind of Convo did he imagine having by showing up at his ex's place?!? Like what would have happened if Ian hadn't been in his rut?!? Wouldn't Ian just be like, "what are you doing here?!?" He wants to be shamed?!?
Were they gonna have a Convo about the weather?!? The class they just took?!? Plans for the future?!?
I think it’s because he was manipulated by him so he felt the need to keep him happy so he was seen as useful. It was an emotionally abusive relationship built on codependency that was exploited.
I meant at the VERY BEGINNING of the relationship.
Not now that's he's been turned into am omega...mated, and with kid.
No, in the beginning it was emotionally abusive. The seme befriended him knowing he was lonely, love bombed him, made him feel he HAD to do certain things or they’d no longer talk then once he realized the uke fell for him he had no more reason to pretend to care about him. He been poisoning him since the beginning. It’s crazy to say but what we’re seeing now is the aftermath of what that mind control led to.
I'm not going to assume what he was like in the past.
I don't get where you saw the emotional abusiveness in the original form.
Also, I'm not sure why you would assume YeJun was lonely?!?
And you assumed he was "love-bombed".
He was DEF NOT love-bombed.
He also lacks the ability or desires ton have friends. He could have easily befriended other people. It's not like DoYoon has kept him ISOLATED or anything?!?
He didn't befriend him because he was "lonely". They met each other first day of class. If YeJun had wanted to or had the capability of making friends he would have. He has a seemingly passive personality. He also only have the ONE SINGLE friend beach home. He's probably an introvert or just not very sociable. Most ppl have more than one friend. I've not seen anyone introduced aside from this SINGLE friend. Don't read something intro ir that's not there. You're assuming a lot based on your bias against DoYoon. He was never physically aggressive in the past. He has certainly seduced him and he knows of YeJun 's developing feelings for him in the past, but he didn't emotionally abuse him. If anything, he was callous and neglectful, since he didn't care more for him than as a side dish.
YeJun stayed with him and had sex with him because he doesn't want to be rejected. I don't know what would have happened if he had said no to the sex and asked DoYoon up front if DoYoon wanted to date him instead of being afraid and then closed his eyes and jumped in the fire. If DoYoon was so abusive why would he have fallen for him in the first place?!? What's so attractive about that?!? Is there something wrong with his brain?!? I don't see it him say any of the crap that he's said now in Noah's flashbacks.
Is is money? Is that why the chapters have such little development and are short like this? When I say short, I’ve read so many stories that are short BUT they do not lack in SOME development. I wonder how long the entire story will be at this point. This is a loop and I’m wondering how long it’ll take for Dan to find his balls and realize he can be nice and not be a punching bag. Geez other uke have at least given some pushback at this point lol and Dan won’t even do the bare minimum. Also, I’m sure potato will say something later but his first priority while JK was on a rampage is to take care of his needs and wait until he’s calmer.
i heard someone say that it will be 100+ chapters so jk has a looooong way to go. but yeah i understand u, we are at 50 chapter but we know NOTHING about WHY jk is such a asshole
i have the same feeling, the chapters feel so SHORT to the point nothing ever really truly HAPPENS, it's like they are divided in half but published as a whole chapter, it really doesn't have a nice flow
Noooo don’t make me faint lmao there’s no way I can get through 80+ chapters of this unless we start getting development after this chapter. The only thing making me read is the hope for it lol or just to see JK get punished. I’d like to read for the development *slouches in chair* . Guess is he was bullied by the guy. It should be a bigger hint though. We’re STILL guessing….
I feel like the cheating thing again is overplayed with this story. I would’ve wanted Jekr to lose fairly but I think…Jerk will lose, Dan will be blamed even after potato defends him, Dan will finally explode and quit, Jae will realize through some reports or hidden video or overheard convo that the match was cheated after Dan is hired by another team. Hell realize he has actual feelings for Dan, rethink his childhood and his problems and start questioning his obsession with winning. Hell think about the one person that was in his corner was his punching bag like he was someone else’s punching bag, know he messed up. Dan will play hard to get a little, he’ll get worn down, due to his grandmother’s condition and stress. OR Dan will shun him away and focus on what’s actually important, Jerk won’t like that and be in denial, he’ll see Dan working for the enemy or something (likely being hired after quitting, due to the medicine needed for gramps) jerk will be at a crossroads and knows he’s the cause of it all, his present misfortune and start his hero/redemption arc. Blah blah
Or After Dan is blamed, it’ll be exposed as a scheme after the loss and Jerk will have lost him because Dan finally comes to his senses and tells him off. The redemption arc begins when he’s brought back to the feeling or being embarrassed, humiliated and knowing that he basically bullied Dan like the reminder that he was a scrawny victim once, everyone will see how he treats Dan front row (this could happen before the scheme is revealed and worse if the news reporters/enemy team etc see it) he’s now labeled a bully who is also a sore loser. F**k his arc though Dan needs an independent arc.
I full on hope that this is what happens cause I LOVE THIS PREDICITON, IM SORRYY BUT I DO
It’s too much smut tbh, there needs to be more storyline! It’s moving wayyy too slow.
I hate that Jae is legit an abusive prick but it’s written as something to be brushed off. Idk like he’ll get some character development and then it’ll be fine cause he had childhood trauma and they’ll live happily ever after. It’s actually disgusting, I will dislike this character regardless of his growth or past. Dan is acting like Jae is the one that’s suffering? Sir, wait until you find out that he had your meat on a platter while you were blindfolded lol. He knew that actor would be a better partner than him. I hope he loses Dan in some way and he’s the one on the receiving end for once. Let him suffer for some chapters, tiring of seeing Dan hurt.
I don’t like the son at all lol, he’s an ass and he knows that the guy has some type of trauma and likes to be cruel. Yea, a very unlikeable seme and I hope the uke tells him off at least once.
yeah he’s being rude because he wants the seme to refuse him and to show resistant- but the seme being the dumb way he is, he’s just obeying everything, but you’re right. the Uke is a fucking ass.
I do kinda feel like the author is dragging their feet with it, like it’s getting repetitive. Why have one couple evolve and grow but stunt the other? Just let Kenji show his feelings and have sex with me clean now. They’re a couple. I want to hear the words out of Kenji’s mouth as well. It’s like Naruto lol Kishi drung his feet for forever with that one.
This is kinda weird, first of all the seme is kinda a creep and slightly forceful (12-15 yr old) which no one is talking about so I got turned off by the first 2 chapters. Hmm I like you so I’m going to do whatever I please type attitude until you give in. That’s just weird for me, it doesn’t have a great plot so it’s not something I can ignore and read, it’s all over the place tbh. But nice art and I’ll look into authors other stories if any. :)
It’s yaoi logic. If I keep forcing myself onto you, I’ll eventually show my love and wear you down. I hate that trope but it’s in a majority of stories and I’ve seen it far worse than this one. This actually turns into a really cute story but I agree that I can’t completely love this because of how it begins.
I’m ready for the chasing, the self improvement arc for Asskyung. I know he can’t truly redeem himself but I’m interested to see how far the author will make him go. He’s on the receiving end now and I love it lol. But seriously he’s getting punched to reality little by little.
Hope the next season has longer chapters with more substance too.