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I’m ready for the chasing, the self improvement arc for Asskyung. I know he can’t truly redeem himself but I’m interested to see how far the author will make him go. He’s on the receiving end now and I love it lol. But seriously he’s getting punched to reality little by little.
Hope the next season has longer chapters with more substance too.

I kind of like that both main characters are messed up in their own ways, it’s why they’re drawn to each other. They mirror each other. Also, the seme is undeniably in love with the uke, I think it’s a mix of obsession and love. He’s unhinged so it definitely comes off as like a drug addiction except he’s obsessed with the boy instead. In conclusion, they both need help and one needs to soften up and admit he’s more than just having “fun”.

I mean at least for the most part the uke seems to have some type of pushback and isn’t super useless but he’s omega so the alpha uses it to r word him over and over and it’s soooo unpleasant. You know he can’t pinpoint his cycle and he has trouble with it. You basically blackmailed him into living with you AND marrying you AND YOU’RE TREATING THE PERSON WHO HAS YOUR CHILD LILE THIS??? You’re r wording them and making them feel like trash??? Wtf. I do not like the alpha at all and NOTHING will redeem him. Dude is proud to be a predator. Most do these stories are like this, same storyline.

Is is money? Is that why the chapters have such little development and are short like this? When I say short, I’ve read so many stories that are short BUT they do not lack in SOME development. I wonder how long the entire story will be at this point. This is a loop and I’m wondering how long it’ll take for Dan to find his balls and realize he can be nice and not be a punching bag. Geez other uke have at least given some pushback at this point lol and Dan won’t even do the bare minimum. Also, I’m sure potato will say something later but his first priority while JK was on a rampage is to take care of his needs and wait until he’s calmer.

I feel like the cheating thing again is overplayed with this story. I would’ve wanted Jekr to lose fairly but I think…Jerk will lose, Dan will be blamed even after potato defends him, Dan will finally explode and quit, Jae will realize through some reports or hidden video or overheard convo that the match was cheated after Dan is hired by another team. Hell realize he has actual feelings for Dan, rethink his childhood and his problems and start questioning his obsession with winning. Hell think about the one person that was in his corner was his punching bag like he was someone else’s punching bag, know he messed up. Dan will play hard to get a little, he’ll get worn down, due to his grandmother’s condition and stress. OR Dan will shun him away and focus on what’s actually important, Jerk won’t like that and be in denial, he’ll see Dan working for the enemy or something (likely being hired after quitting, due to the medicine needed for gramps) jerk will be at a crossroads and knows he’s the cause of it all, his present misfortune and start his hero/redemption arc. Blah blah

Or After Dan is blamed, it’ll be exposed as a scheme after the loss and Jerk will have lost him because Dan finally comes to his senses and tells him off. The redemption arc begins when he’s brought back to the feeling or being embarrassed, humiliated and knowing that he basically bullied Dan like the reminder that he was a scrawny victim once, everyone will see how he treats Dan front row (this could happen before the scheme is revealed and worse if the news reporters/enemy team etc see it) he’s now labeled a bully who is also a sore loser. F**k his arc though Dan needs an independent arc.

It’s too much smut tbh, there needs to be more storyline! It’s moving wayyy too slow.

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I hate that Jae is legit an abusive prick but it’s written as something to be brushed off. Idk like he’ll get some character development and then it’ll be fine cause he had childhood trauma and they’ll live happily ever after. It’s actually disgusting, I will dislike this character regardless of his growth or past. Dan is acting like Jae is the one that’s suffering? Sir, wait until you find out that he had your meat on a platter while you were blindfolded lol. He knew that actor would be a better partner than him. I hope he loses Dan in some way and he’s the one on the receiving end for once. Let him suffer for some chapters, tiring of seeing Dan hurt.