Classic: “author wants to make straight goon content but instead of just accepting the shamefulness of making it they pretend they have an ounce of writing skills and come up with a ridiculously garbage plot”
Of course, it can’t be a trashy fetish content goon chlop manhwa without the mc, despite being grotesquely ugly and disfigured, somehow making every girl fall in love with him to the point where they’d lose their common sense, rationality, and dignity, the mc having a harem, and the fmls having semen for brains….. sighhhh when will male authors be wiped off the face of the earth….
How could they do that to the younger brother that’s so fucking disgusting and the older one really just said “sorry” afterwards?!? Like that’s gonna fix any damn trauma… i originally hated the ml bottom and thought his attitude was fucking annoying and he was a weirdo for tryna get the mc by getting him drunk so I felt bad for mc and ended up skipping chapters just to see what happens… the fact that I decided to skip to chapter 20 makes me seriously consider what i might’ve done in my past life to deserve stumbling upon such grotesque actions… so many things wrong there I mean first of all… the coercion from the ml to both the brothers??? “Obey me or never see me again”?? How low, manipulative and abhorrent… but even then I would’ve been left and never saw his fuckass again so they both weird for staying! Second of all, idc what no one says the younger brother didn’t not deserve that fucking shit show of a humiliation ritual. The older brother being okay with it too made me sick to my stomach, like.. those fake ass tears don’t mean shit when you still decided to stay, decided to go through with it and then decided to have sex with the sex offender afterwards? Like are we fucking forgetting bottom ml literally raped the younger brother when they first met?!? Like OMFG I swear there better not be anyone defending that sex offender he’s such a piece of hot rotting dog shit… I skipped chapters to see if the older brother would dump the ml or stand up for the younger brother after finding out what happened, come to find out he’s a fucking weirdo too… and because of that sole reason, I like the younger brother better and idc what anyone says cus the older brothers so fucking weird for that.. and I really dgaf enough to waste my time properly reading this garbage, in order to see if the younger brother really was more of an asshole beyond simply stealing the older brothers dates
like what the hell was the author tryna do here?!? do they think they’re quirky or some shit, consistently spewing hot garbage?? Then again I should’ve known from the fact that I remember dropping this hot shit years ago and dropping another terrible yaoi they made… what a waste of a good artstyle this author can’t write for shit. #goingintomyblacklist
Even though I skipped chapters just to see what happens I still feel like I wasted my time on this garbage…. Seme is the classic yandere rapist with zero conscience and the attitude of a roach and the ukes reasoning and common sense eventually becomes replaced with sympathy nobody fucking asked for like… life would’ve been dandy if they just destroyed the portal and never went back then all the “what-ifs” would be no more but no this nigga had to go feel bad for some things that aren’t even human like it was his business… idk about yall but I don’t know what world I’d ever be in where I have a guilty conscience for the deaths of things that aren’t human when all I was subjected to in their world was rape, discrimination, confinement , and harassment.
Old xian~ I remember when you used to be in your prime posting like 4 eps weekly... but now we get 4 panels once every 2 months (it’s like Coryxkenshin) then again we know chinas crackdown on the yaoi franchise is getting serious so that could very well be the reason why uploads have ice age like period intervals. I suspect even when my hair turns gray I’ll still be tuning in to see the boys finally grown and successful as the most popular band in china; 19 days!
Seeing the authors note was even more frightening like I can’t believe that there are mentally ill people out here making what can barely be qualified as a bl (seeing as how there was zero fucking romance) instead of being admitted to the psych ward. If you can draw and write rape, sexual harassment and such horrifying themes without a care in the world and not even so much as the nuance to portray it as something that is to be heavily frowned upon, it’s probably because your desensitized or just truly think it’s okay in real life.. which is really disgusting like- this is probably the shit the Chinese and Japanese government saw when they decided they needed to crack down on the yaoi franchise like your ruining it for the rest of us omfg! Put the pen down permanently and get psychological assessed author-nim
NO FOR REALL LIKE THIS BITCHES ARE INSANEEE, i mean I get it—there's a heavy wall between fiction and reality, and fiction are supposed to enhance and navigate your moral compass, but fuck what is the purpose of this as if its not that HARD to fully comprehend that this SHIT is completely wrong. It baffles and amaze me like what are you trying to prove? U trying to desensitized the reader or shit? U from tel aviv??
LMAFOA RIGHT this genuinely some israelgpt nonsense cus wtf
This motivated me to draw more noncon ngl
Wow bro is SOO tuff I can feel the aura through the screen
Why is it that all modern straight smuts revolve around an ugly ass man taking advantage of beautiful girls that the just as ugly, self insert, porn addicted author, writes to be absolutely fucking stupid to the world around them! Yknow what it’s my fault for not checking the title and just pressing it cus I thought the artstyle looked good but wtf!! Everytime I read and drop dogwash like this it’s always because these stupid fucking male authors who have never interacted with a woman other than their mom for more than a minute never know how to write women!! They make it so that they have no critical thinking skills, only have the most surface level brain rotting thoughts that are solely about sex or superficial nonsense, and just happen to be okay enough with the sexual harassment their facing to not get help?!? The one thing these male authors are always able to get right tho is projecting their disgusting fantasies onto their ugly ass main characters and perpetuating a harmful narrative. None of the men in these comments are criticizing this bs because they all think it’s okay to sexually harass a woman and that’s the problem w this hot shit. I’ve only skimmed up to the beginning of chapter 4, but seeing as how the ugly ass guy wasn’t even remorseful over the fact that he’s greatly inconveniencing the woman by making her loose sleep and embarrass herself in public is what makes this so deplorable. And to add on top of that the author with the writing skills of a chicken made it so that the woman isn’t the least bit freaked out, or panicked at the entirety of the situation?!? But don’t get me started on the idiot men with the lexile level of preschool childeren and critical thinking skills of crickets who are enjoying this shit and think it’s okay… like YALL are the problem!! And YES it IS that deep because yall fucktards are unable to distinguish fiction from reality and let fictional unrealistic scenarios shape your morality in the most negative way possible! Niggas will read this shit and then come out with the belief that it’s physically impossible to make a woman feel discomfort and fear when sexually harassing them which eventually turns into “its okay to prey and harass women cus they secretly like it”, shaping how yall view and treat women and women’s rights online and irl. Which for some reason is never a problem when women read fictional stories but always one for men?!? Like I don’t get it! Are men devolving backwards or do yall truly have some type of chronic illness that prevents your brain from developing past the age of 7 while making you highly susceptible to only be influenced by the most negative and harmful types of media?!? Alas, this was my reminder to mainly stick to reading queer stories… atleast with them, the authors know how to write, but even when they don’t, the readers are able to call them out on their bs. All these fucking porn addicted commenters saying this garbage is “peak” are brainwashed by their fantasies and fetishizations so much so that they have effectively blocked themselves from the ability to acquire even the slightest bit of media literacy… smh!!!
never agreed w someone so bad
I’m too woke for this poorly crafted bullshit… the American stereotyping is so freaking cringe (esp with the names and politics) and the objectification of the women in this is extremely crass.. the author erases all form of critical thinking skills and reduces them to simply tools of sexual canon fodder for the mc, stripping them of any sort of personality so they can merely be used to try and convince the audience that the mc is someone worth reading for-which btw just adds on to the authors terrible writing cus as much as they try to convince the audience otherwise, the mc clear straight garbage. I despise yaoi storylines where the women are present just for show or to be used as a catalyst(10 times out of 9 in a degrading/dehumanizing way) so that the mc’s can get together. Women already go through enough shit irl…If you can’t write a single woman with a likeable personality and semi significant role in your BL then just don’t put them there in the first place, if anything that would actually be way better and less insulting. Next, what I hate the most beyond the objectification and reduction of the women is the fact that they try so hard to make the mc likable but the writings so poorly put together that it only ends up making him more insufferable. Nobody wants to read an entitled arrogant inconsiderate manipulative skank get everything he wants at the expense of others with ZERO consequences! Plus there’s no hint at him even considering reforming for redemption…. With the way the storyline is going, its leaning more towards a Codename Anastasia trope where the seme is just absolute garbage and instead of reforming and learning to treat the uke right, the uke just learns to accept his bullshit to the point where, for reasons unknown to even God himself, ends up falling in love with the shitbag, rather than what it SHOULD be going in the plot direction of: something like Low tide in twilight.. Also why make an American based bl if you can’t even so much as a draw a face on the black background characters… it’s weird and it shows that the only reason why Dane is black is because of fetishization…so once again I’m too woke for this bs
Get a life it’s fiction you’ll be okay I promise
nah, let them be. They're already too far into the darkness to be saved lmao. This comment is too funny to even make me mad. Your so-called wokeness isn't even woke but pure self-righteousness bullshit.
Is this some new tactics goin on to compare it with codename anesthesia or to compare Grayson with Zhenya. But sry to break it to you, he nothing like that. Nor the story is like low tide. We are barely into 10 chapters. You are comparing Grayson with those rapists characters? He never sexually assaulted anyone let alone Dane. Yes it is a common stereotypes in bl mahwas to portray a women like that this is not a first one. And treat uke ryt?? What has he even done to the uke so far?
Get a life. You are just frustrated
Let's not forget about how he made his younger brother go through alllll that trauma , that will stay with him for the rest of his life (that he slept with a dog in one of his ruts) people down voting have really left their brains in their mother's wombs cause no one can enjoy reading this BS after reading thattt
And yes that point about women is totally valid, this is not just a story, people absorb what they see, hear, read, this is gonna be someone's fantasy, women lowered to a level where a man with good face is all they want and how can they reject a guy with tht face,
They are literally portrayed as being with no brains and but only a vagina to satisfy and I hate it to core
Dane isn't black and he never was.
I don't know why some readers seem to think that. He is tanned by the sun, and he is drawn like that. There is no indication in the story that he is black. And the author herself discribed him at an event on ridi as tanned by the sun, so this is canon.
Oops I misclick was supposed to give you a thumbs down cause tf are you on about bro???
There's only 10 chapter and we barely see anything besides greyson on other story told by other characters perspective so why are you saying there's no action that there will be any redemption for him????? I read the novel in one go didn't even sleep at night and let me tell you I cry so fucking much for greyson. Mind you I was talking bullshit about him all this time for what he did at chase. Also if you haven't realize which you really don't all the miller family has smth wrong with them psychologically and greyson included even though it doesn't justify what he did it's still smth to take note about.
I won't say more since its wouldn't matter anyway but maybe don't judge a story without knowing more about it okay, Ty for my Ted talk goodbye <3
FINALLY SOMEONE WITH A BRAIN omg i don’t even know why i continue to read the CMIYC bullshit it’s literally trash writing & when I read the comments under the stories I swear it’s all bots the writing is soooo corny especially the American names/ tropes. Don’t get me wrong I love toxic stories or stories that have deeper themes but the way the writers address the topics here are so lazy I damner I could write a better story. The community for this franchise of stories believe the stories/ characters are peak when you can barely call them two dimensional lmao.
Literally I don’t even under throw ppl can even like Greyson, the story w his brother is also corny but I’m caught up to it, Greyson is a trash human I don’t care how much trauma u have u shouldn’t fucking psychological abuse the next person
& TBH idk I feel like even the writing in codename is better. I skipped around in that story but I’ve been reading it recently & shit it feels like Zhenya has a better personality then the ml here. If ur gonna be a dick at least kill the ppl rather then using them as collateral damage just to find a mate.
Interesting, if you look at it objectively, KMIYC is one of the author weaker works.
And it's ok what Chase does? What do you think the persons he tried to kill or injured would think of him?
The question here is what is worse: the person who knows what he is doing, or the person who doesn't and think he helps?
And if you think you could put everything Chase does on the parents and siblings door, that won't really work in that universe. Most who only read Kiss me if you can, have next to no idea about his family. And if you're KMIYC manhwa only you will even have difficulties understanding this universe.
Serioulsy, if you want normal characters that author is the wrong address. Her dominant alphas are all more or less psychopaths.
the burger sign was frying me
Girl I’ve read crazier things than this.. both characters are shit both stories are shit at the end of the day tho u not finna have me believing I fucked an animal
If you think Zhenya is better than that itself is showing ur mentality.
Say tht when u have a mental condition as sever as Grayson and a father like Ashley
Eff both of them lol
If you find both shit why do you even bother reading them?
If I really find something shit I' ll stop reading, because it is a waste of time for me. But you seem to still read KMIYC, and the story is almost done.
You are compairing a story which is almost done with a story hat just started? Because I doubt you read the novels.
You know next to nothing about Grayson and how his character develops and compare him to other characters?
I can't even bring myself to read stuffs like CNA and NZS. The problem is people can actually read worse of worse and name it as an peace of work but where every thing is nothing but shit. But when it comes to some actual real complex psychological stuffs they call them as bs. As the former works need mo brain work and the latter requires a lot of real thinking and understanding
They like redemption that comes after raping the mcs with no real character growth.