The writing is just a little off..?. Kinda reminds me of when people make short comics based off their real life experiences. I don’t know how to explain it I thought it was like a vent comic at first. Then it started to escalate more and more and this is just a comic about this poor guy getting bullied constantly by literally everyone around him and beat up and even raped all cause he’s gay and his bf “looks old.” Then the personality of his BF went off the rocker and it just became kinda annoying and even more fucking sad for MC. Like, damn. Just a tragic ass story.
Also, fuck the first orange haired girl like what the fuck you cunt.
Even though this was canceled I don’t mind the ending. I thought it would have ended sooner honestly but the fact the author wanted to keep going and added character development to MC *after* everything happened was a nice add on. They both changed each other for the better. Beautiful. I feel like I can picture the ending enough that I’m satisfied. And they’re happy so… heh.











Either this wasn’t doing well and they had to end it or the author just didn’t wanna do it anymore cause that ending imo is so abrupt.
First off, this story is written so well as a middle aged man becoming a high schooler. He is enjoying his youth he never got to enjoy as well as having friends he never got to have. Plus, he protects because they hold a special place in his heart. He never gives in to the advances on the young girls (fucking finally). He thinks of Noren as someone who he wants to give a better life because she’s constantly being put in shitty situations. He protects her like he would his daughter.