I wish they switched (●￣(ｴ)￣●) that seme deserves a good poundin- I mean a beating
Ch 6.1 is not from this story but they got me curious so i looked at authors other works. Its an one shot called The Last Lover. It wasn't bad, i actually liked it more than this one.
This was much worse than what i imagined I thought everyone was overreacting bcz of the obvious copy paste plot so I was like that's fine by me, but noope the story just sucks unfortunately. Full of plot holes, more than i can be bothered to mention here. Even at last chapter mc isn't in love at all but they slapped smut scene like everything is fine?? Okey the problem was too big of a plot for a 6 chapter manga. I thought if it would be cut nicely it could be done good but nope tried to include a lot( of stolen content) but could conclude none.
I love dark little stories. Uke is not a pushover, takes the initiative, seme is obsessive maniac type of flag. I quite like that kind of dynamics tbh. Since the art is godly I would have loved to see some extras for after story tho.
This story has sooo much potential but it doesn't use it at all and goes on to be a generic yaoi. Not that I hate it, I still like quite it a lot. Art is really good, story is kinda good, plot is unique too. Just feeling it could have been so much better than this. Going for a light hearted story instead of adding some dark aspects is kinda missing out. Uke feels too much like a pushover too. I feel like i might enjoy it a lot more if I could accept the story as it is tho. ( "if u want a better story go ahead and do it yourself, if u can't just stfu" said my last rational braincell)
Ngl i liked him more with the helmet on (︶︿︶)＝凸 Would recommend reading. Nice short story with healthy relationship and good ending.
I think chapter 2 has missing pages. It felt cut out of place and seeing chapter 3 they remembered something happening we didnt see at ch 2 like it did happen, and it was an important part too. Their relationship just upgraded out of nowhere(cuz of the missing pages). Hope it gets fixed someday. (Probably not unless there comes an official version tho)
Traslation is bad. Art was nice and i read it but i really wanted a strong yakuza uke but the yakuza was acting lika a 12 y.o shoujo girl :D if he was only kindhearted its okey but he was stupid:(( Also if you are looking for a plot nope its not here just a classic smut bl ╮(￣▽￣)╭ ( also chap 4 and 5 was same for me diffrent translations)
I loved reading this. No angst just a very healthy relationship with good communication. They were so cute and art was great. I also liked side characters very much. Good readლ(´ڡ`ლ)
The endingg!??? Jsmdkfkf i didn’t expect that to be the last chapter at all lmao. The author said fuck it to all the possible future problems and ended the story when they are the happiest lmao.