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Holy fuck. This is so good. Plot is a 10/10.characterisation 10/10. Art 10/10. Smut 10/10. No rapey stuff between main pairing, ml thinks consent is important. Again , 10/10. Comedy 10/10. Story 10/10. Build up 10/10. Foreshadowing 10/10.
Read this and your life will be better
To sum it up: overall I very much enjoyed reading this. Good story, good, lovable characters, fun plot.
Only complaint is that the ending seemed a bit abrupt, even though it was a happy resolution- it felt a bit incomplete regarding things such as how exactly the mc and ml lived out the rest of their lives, did they end up marrying or not, did Clauden end up going back to luans place or did luan live with Claude, and little things like that. Obviously the main stuff got wrapped up, and I was satisfied overall, but it was still an abrupt ending.