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I feel like Scott's story could've been interesting if it was it's own book and it wasn't taking up half of the main couples story. We have like a few chps left apparently idk so the ending is probably gonna seem a lil rushed to me. Because rn just feels like two different stories with entire different vibes with a sorta messy nonlinear timeline forced together. (Maybe it's just me(*´ー｀*)) but because of this some of the developments feel stale i don't really know how to explain it. like we see so much of scott and his story that the main couple feel like their being pushed to the side( ｡ﾟДﾟ｡). Especially when the meetings they did have after the separation arc rn there wasn't alot of crazy development that stuck with me (compared to everything with scott).
Cause I'm wondering if this story is about Scott or the main couple???? The story started off so well and it just went downhill. It's a slop drama now, trying to get our attention but actually doing the opposite.
I truly feel for Scott but like this wasn't originally about him. I'd care more for him if he didn't interrupt the main couple so much
The handwriting style is growing on me. I feel like it fits really well with Yaharu's character specifically. Thank you (*´▽｀) translator