I feel like Scott's story could've been interesting if it was it's own book and it wasn't taking up half of the main couples story. We have like a few chps left apparently idk so the ending is probably gonna seem a lil rushed to me. Because rn just feels like two different stories with entire different vibes with a sorta messy nonlinear timeline forced together. (Maybe it's just me(*´ー｀*)) but because of this some of the developments feel stale i don't really know how to explain it. like we see so much of scott and his story that the main couple feel like their being pushed to the side( ｡ﾟДﾟ｡). Especially when the meetings they did have after the separation arc rn there wasn't alot of crazy development that stuck with me (compared to everything with scott).
Cause I'm wondering if this story is about Scott or the main couple???? The story started off so well and it just went downhill. It's a slop drama now, trying to get our attention but actually doing the opposite.
I truly feel for Scott but like this wasn't originally about him. I'd care more for him if he didn't interrupt the main couple so much
Maybe their just light yanderes but it just felt like until chp6 ml would say he's crazy for uke but he didn't seem crazy for him. It feels like he's just kinda sadistic. It just felt distant, it might be because of the lack of actual date scenes and the large amount of nsfw scenes. Like he knows uke likes him and and he overthinks but he can't idk send a quick text when busy. And also ukes yan moments felt kinda normal they didn't give the crazy insecurity everyone makes it seem like. His manger and friend of 3 year didn't provide what I feel is basic communication(that he has other talent or he's going on a business dinner) so he would obviously feel down and like he doesn't really know him. like idk it felt like ml character got sacrificed to make him seem mysterious. So yeah the ending was cute and ml yan felt more yan but I'm still a little disappointed ╥﹏╥
Why is literally anyone surprised his phone is bugged. Beom would be out for weeks letting mc roam free. Obviously his not just gonna trust bro he's a killer. I honestly still feel like that's tame he could leave his phone home and run. Me personally anymore trust and he might as well had just let him free.
These characters acting mad clueless I luv them anyways╮(￣▽￣)╭
Literally nothing crazy happened this chapter but I'm crying like their married i love them but like stawwpp ╥﹏╥
So it was supposed to be freak 4 freak 4 freak but the author made one character clearly more forceful compared to the 2 who could go just watching their crushes with slight interaction for years. This causes a discourse in fans because it's no longer really the freak relationship when it's not equally crazy it's 2 stalkers and the one forced to move the storyline which is seeming to make them the villain(also lets not pretend mitsu giving the cardigan helps none if tate wasn't there he'd let him out naked. You wanna defend him then be real at least). THE CHARACTERS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE CRAZY AND TOXIC BUT IN A WAY IT EVENS OUT (︶︿︶)＝凸. From my interpretation of course. By this I mean the characters laughing in a corner watching the other is no where near actually interacting and getting between relationships. The best I can hope for is hachi and Mitsu meeting at a park both druck out their mind hachi kisses him impulsively and they all work out. Still team poly just not team author.(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
The handwriting style is growing on me. I feel like it fits really well with Yaharu's character specifically. Thank you (*´▽｀) translator