I like the story and all but I feel like its a lot of telling instead of showing. like the ML narrates his back in one flash-back as tells you exactly why he acts the way he acts. it's just kind of jarring and makes him feel like a character instead of a person in the story. you can communicate his psyche by guiding readers to come to the conclusion on their own.
does anyone know the bl where the bottom is a lawyer or something and the top is a crime mafia guy. It was lowkey fucked up and the top guy shoots the bottom in the leg because he's leaving on train or something. I actually liked it up to that point but please help me find it
Here is my baby https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/roses_and_champagne/
i kinda wish the story was just the past life stuff. the characters are way more interesting and we actually see how their relationship progresses. in the present, they kinda just have sex and their isn't much else to ML's character(the present version). we are never shown anything to make MC's feelings for ML believable.
Kinda agree, 'cause like Taeoh seems like an extra in the present to me, the author did him dirty tbh
yeah we get no scenes between jiwon and taeoh of them being people and developing their relationship. it's just sex. not to mention taeoh kidnapped, imprisoned, and serially raped MC. I know that makes sense for him being a criminal but it still ruins the romance and isn't consistent with his past self.
it feels like jaeseok is the real ML