I like the story and all but I feel like its a lot of telling instead of showing. like the ML narrates his back in one flash-back as tells you exactly why he acts the way he acts. it's just kind of jarring and makes him feel like a character instead of a person in the story. you can communicate his psyche by guiding readers to come to the conclusion on their own.
I’m enjoying it but you’re not wrong about any of that. It’s definitely not living up to its potential.
That’s exactly what I was thinking. It has so much potential but it’s way too clunky
I feel like mc killed his dad while sleep walking....
I love this story! It's such a hidden gem. so so beautiful. it feels like genuine art rather than a lot of the cheap webtoon slop. you know it's good shit when the environment is properly illustrated instead of green-screened in.
What chapter does he get his memories back in the novel? also link is here https://lunarletterstl.com/manga/flowers-are-bait/
Thank you
If lil a and fluffy don't fuck then why did they make him so big?
alright that's it who's disliked
i kinda wish the story was just the past life stuff. the characters are way more interesting and we actually see how their relationship progresses. in the present, they kinda just have sex and their isn't much else to ML's character(the present version). we are never shown anything to make MC's feelings for ML believable.
Kinda agree, 'cause like Taeoh seems like an extra in the present to me, the author did him dirty tbh
yeah we get no scenes between jiwon and taeoh of them being people and developing their relationship. it's just sex. not to mention taeoh kidnapped, imprisoned, and serially raped MC. I know that makes sense for him being a criminal but it still ruins the romance and isn't consistent with his past self.
it feels like jaeseok is the real ML