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The premise is cute, but… realistically why are we going along with this mr. ML? He never specified he’s trying to live out a fantasy and put on an act, that would be exhausting to constantly try to meet a fantasy you’re not privy to? Idek if this makes sense but it really kind of pissed me off when he came home “drunk”… Leading the ML on just so he can slap him and have a K-Drama moment? Fr? Tbh I would have sat him down and either said LET ME JUST LOVE YOU HOW I AM CAPABLE or left him if he didn’t cut the perpetual role playing -_-
As the title of my comment says— I’m holding off on judging until a few more chapters, but I really don’t like the direction this chapter took for numerous reasons… the biggest being that storytelling-wise it feels like a cheap way to show/remind readers that Jaeyi is doing this no-strings attached after being so sweet and caring with Ideum, and thus it doesn’t match the image of our ml we’ve been trained to expect over the past 18 chapters. That man better realize how much of a piece of trash he’s being and apologize on his head, otherwise this story loses that refreshing air that it had… friends with benefits without treating the uke like a personal belonging.
I’m pretty sure on the Korean lezhin, it’s tagged with regretful top, so it’d make sense
I really enjoyed reading what you wrote! Calm and brings up good points. Especially the cheap easy cop out for plot. It could be worse was my own thought. But it couldve been better- but that would be MY idea of better. This story is pretty damn good. Regretful top better apologize!
YAS! I just hope it’s well written atp T-T Still, this was a really cheap way of setting that up, but alas tropes exist for a reason whether we like them or not…
Absolutely it could be worse! But when there is already so much worse on this website (and others) I find myself rolling my eyes when stuff like this occurs in good stories… Because I had better expectations based on the way this story initially started. And thank you ^^~ Just wanted to share my piece when I saw all the people insulting those who didn’t like the recent chapter T-T I’m not a moralist, I just have toxic ml fatigue, yk? If Jaeyi’s regret doesn’t go above and beyond I’mma be very disappointed lol
Toxic ml fatigue is so real. Like, we've seen this before. Many times
Precisely, it has gotten so so old lmao. I need more yearner and crybaby mls in my life
AGREEEEDDDD