Dropping bc how are you gonna let this girl actively lie dead to your face, acknowledge she is lying, then immediately write her a letter in response happy that she is "trying" to reconcile after you LITERALLY SAW HER TALKING SHIT ABOUT YOU TO THE OTHER LADIES AT THE PARTY AND SHE IS STILL SAYING SHE NEVER DID. Absolutely ridiculous nonsense
Actually so thrown off by how they seemingly specifically made the main change for the style of this season just... cunty slutty waist and a big bubble butt for the MC. Im brushing off his weird face because I get a cackle everytime we get a full body shot of him now because its just the longest skinny slut ever, he looks so ridiculous its kind of funヾ(☆▽☆)
I wish the entire story was from the circle eyed guys perspective and we just follow him around as he tries to stop the gays from being in questionable stressful situationships until he gives up and find himself with a cute guy who isnt toxic, stressful, or a weirdo and they just get together and love on eachother happily while the drama continues for everyone else in the background
Ik this story is super old by now but I truly wasn't able to feel the chemistry between these characters? Maybe its bc I think the Red Haired guy is a general jerk to literally every other person in the story and that the MC just got dragged into his orbit and was having a bad stressful time outside of them just having sex the entire story?
All they do is argue and yell and shit on eachother until they kiss and have sex and then say they like eachother. It still feels like the MC just kinda likes this guy bc he's never had a chance to like anyone else on top of the guy forcing his constant presence on him. The ML says he likes him but doesnt understand how he thinks and constantly sits around distressed about it. But thats like entirely who the MC is? Thats his brain?
Hell this recent side chapter is new and the only thing they do is argue about parts of eachothers actions and then Makeout and go to have sex. WE DONT EVEN GET TO SEE THEM PROPERLY BONE! All this drama and distress and I cant even see this dudes hole. Or just proper sex scenes in general. Its a good read but this relationship is not really enjoyable imo
My first read of it I actually had my feelings opposite of you. I felt real bad for the ml and mc was pissing me off.
Reread recently and I gotta say. It’s an unhealthy relationship in general. Like people with opposing personalities can get together and stay together but it’s like you said they didn’t even try to navigate their problems.
T_T I love the plot idea but it feels like the execution is off.
I think I just have more sympathy for the MC because atleast he is uncomfortably direct about all the ways he takes everything thats said to him. I wasnt ever suprised or thrown off by his responses and feelings. But it just bothered me more that the ML knows all of this about him but still pushes and gets angry about it as if its just new and sprung upon him everytime.
Add in how shitty he was to the girl the MC was friends with and how he was to multiple people close to him in the story I just cant like the guy and it sucks. I really agree the execution is off when it comes to the opposites attract trope (which sucks because the art/characters are gorgeous)
How is it going so fast but still making me feel excited for whats to come??? I wish everything that has currently happened was spread out to atleast 100+ chapters like everything is so fast that it feels like we are speeding towards the end so quickly I have never wished for filler before but this story is making me wish we had spent more time with all these characters (/TДT)/
I need to see the white haired bestie and the other editor bone please give us side stories pleaseeeeeee ╥﹏╥
It kind of boggles me that there are people that think its problematic that the MC has a bit of a hybrid fetish while we are all actively reading hybrid smut for similar reasons. God forbid you find certain types of people particularly attractive and seek them out because of it. You probably found yourself here after specifically seeking out gay or anthro stories in the first place lol
Is the entire first chapter not a rip off of Write me, Touch me, Read me? Like exactly same opening with the train situation like beat by beat even down to the way he gets touched by train dudes imagination, and the mind reading plot stuff? I wonder which came first or if its the same author/artist
Yeah thats the mixture of mind reading by touch and a full chikan train sequence really threw me for a minute there especially since its the very start of both stories. The rest of the plot lines are entirely different but the first chapters are so similar that I went and re read WTR after this one because it stuck out to me. Now I have to go hunt down more mind reading trope stories because theyre all so good ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ










WHY DID THEY DO THAT TO HIM! WHY DID THEY EVEN HAVE TO CUT HIS HAIR THEY MADE HIM SO GENERIC AND SOFT INSTEAD OF A RUGGED HOTTY AND IM IN PAIN ╥﹏╥