M00nBrar

It was going good and hot up until the second threesome which could have been waaaaaaay better. After that, the FL even said it herself, 'she went off the rails'. Plus, I think one of the comments said that the FL kept cheating on her BF. What BF? The guy couldn't get his emo a$$ together through one date without running off and leaving her wondering where she stood. They dated, sure, but I don't think that immediately made him her BF and if he didn't feel close enough to disclose such crucial information then it definitely wasn't a relationship. Would I be pissed off if I got that reasoning as a defense for cheating due to someone else's psychological trauma? Yes, but also I am watching fictional characters do stuff so I am okay defending the fictional logic. I also hated that every time he reached out to her she came back and apologized because she thought him running off in a huff was her fault. So one is broken and the other one is a push over. Like I said, it was hot until chapter 22(?), and then I didn't know what to do with the characters...

It has hot dialogue and what is mostly good art. However, there were some scenes that I was not sure what I was looking at. It also low key gave Inu Yasha vibes with the whole Saya/Saki situation except even as door mat-ey as Kagome ever got I don't think she ever would have rolled over after being hard core SA, being told it was because Inu Yasha confused her with someone else, then proceeded to have slept with him because 'it wasn't that he had done it it was that he had confused her with someone else', AND then be told the person he confused her with was her ancestor whose name was Kikyo. And the whole thing with the school friend who locked her in a room and called HER crazy, but said he loved her? Yeah, like my review's title says, "Hot, but..."