I was so excited for an oxo story since I havent found many but this was so disappointing. It had a lot of potential at the beginning but I feel like the characters just dont have much chemistry. On top of that, it felt more like a bxo than anything and the ending was just so rushed.. I feel let down (╥_╥)
It was going so good.. I was really enjoying the story, but then Luan had Clauden beaten??? Like that genuinely ruined the entire thing for me. The whole thing was handled really weirdly and was unnecessary imo. Idm angst, but that was just poorly written and uncomfortable #-.-)
Young?? Newgen!?!? Im neither of those things, which is why im saying this sucks dude I have literally read it done better so many times over the years in many different stories, thats why this one frustrates me!! They could've done so much with it, it really started off good (╬ ̄皿 ̄)
Obviously a character doing something shitty isnt poor writing









The ai use is SO unnecessary here bruh.. im deeply annoyed. The last thing I want to see when im trying to read is the fact that ai was involved in any way, shape or form