It's enjoyable but I'm getting really tired of the obvious foreshadowing."Little did I expect", "He didn't know at the time..", "Or so I thought.. but that's a future story". Really messes with the flow of the story for me. （￣へ￣）
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It's enjoyable but I'm getting really tired of the obvious foreshadowing."Little did I expect", "He didn't know at the time..", "Or so I thought.. but that's a future story". Really messes with the flow of the story for me. （￣へ￣）
Did I miss something?
Chapter 1: All players must clear the tower in 90 days or the world will end.
Very few chapters later: This is the official government testing facility, this is a high level player I've heard of before, there's laws and regulations...
Seems like the initial part of the story was just a kinda flimsy excuse for setting it up, instead of a well thought out premise. It's not an unenjoyable story so far (chapter 19), but the premise is so flimsy that it's hard to get any immersion out of it.
Might just be a miss translation looking at the other chapters translation it says clear the (next) floor in 90 days. Not the whole tower
Ah, thanks, that makes a bit more sense... still though, unless I missed a lot of time passing somewhere, the sudden infrastructure, guilds, vested interests and whatnot seem _very_ sudden. Unbelievably sudden（￣へ￣）