the drama is is one thing
But tbh they are all toxic in a way
I think I would be single for a while and do some soul searching if I was the mc.
Men have not, will not, can not ever be your saving grace. That has to be you.
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if I was the mc I would turn my back on him, fuck you and fuck your weak ass willpower. Had the shoe been on the other foot he would have refused.
Stupid bitch （￣へ￣）
clearly support a dysfunctional relationship, rather the a healthy relationship. Ps this story creeps out but cheers lol
It's a pass for me. I feel that the plot was weak, there for felt a bit feeding. I think it would be best to over haul the plot entirely. And place the romance in a adult setting. Were the dynamic can be drafted better. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
literally turned a good guy into a villain, this plot tool was horrible。 (︶︿︶)＝凸
the doctor literally said parents cannot donate blood because it's dangerous for the baby so he is trying to protect wo. why this make him a villain?
From a writer's perspective they way they used this as a unsuccessful plot tool was not beneficial to the story at all. Telling him he is gonna kill him, pinning a rather useless plot twist to star up drama when there is already alot. This was not necessary. To turn a support character into a bad guy who got them hurt. But hey at least 17 people think the same. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Ok sorry I understand, you're not blaming him about being a villain. you were talking about writer's way of writing. I'm not gonna give any spoiler but in the end writer manages to use this occasion in a good way.
Yes haha i hope it was kindaaaa useless to throw a good guy under the bus, but every yaoi has it's flaws. Webtoons kinda are know for their more random plot tools. I guess get the money ㅋㅋㅋ
yes batchhhh that is what you call a awesome plot, awesome art, and original style.
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