okay okay im gonna be completely honest here!! when i started reading this i fell in LOVE with the concept and trope, i thought i had stumbled across a gold mine.. until i kept reading, and lwk the build up kinda sucked.. it felt like a narusasu age gap crack fic in the worst way possible. dont get me wrong, theyre adorable, but like with a story baseline of ml saving kid mc in the past and having that one good deed ultimately keeping him relatively sane for a few years, the author shouldve known how to properly swerve it from a possible found family tag into romance.. because godamnit i cant help but perceive the ml as somewhat of a father figure to the mc.. and does the ml even actually love the mc for who he is? not just as someone who paved a way into the normalcy hes always dreamed of, but just as HIM yknow? like no guys trust me i really do see the vision of it happening but the buildup was so asscheeks that we didnt get proper transitions in between the major plot events, which led to a seemingly half assed manhwa with art that has so much potential it just hurts.. MAN this wouldve been a favorite of mine if it was actually taken seriously by the author..
okay okay im gonna be completely honest here!! when i started reading this i fell in LOVE with the concept and trope, i thought i had stumbled across a gold mine.. until i kept reading, and lwk the build up kinda sucked.. it felt like a narusasu age gap crack fic in the worst way possible. dont get me wrong, theyre adorable, but like with a story baseline of ml saving kid mc in the past and having that one good deed ultimately keeping him relatively sane for a few years, the author shouldve known how to properly swerve it from a possible found family tag into romance.. because godamnit i cant help but perceive the ml as somewhat of a father figure to the mc.. and does the ml even actually love the mc for who he is? not just as someone who paved a way into the normalcy hes always dreamed of, but just as HIM yknow? like no guys trust me i really do see the vision of it happening but the buildup was so asscheeks that we didnt get proper transitions in between the major plot events, which led to a seemingly half assed manhwa with art that has so much potential it just hurts.. MAN this wouldve been a favorite of mine if it was actually taken seriously by the author..
Couldn’t have said it any better!
Read the other work by this author, i promise it's worth it