okay okay im gonna be completely honest here!! when i started reading this i fell in LOVE with the concept and trope, i thought i had stumbled across a gold mine.. until i kept reading, and lwk the build up kinda sucked.. it felt like a narusasu age gap crack fic in the worst way possible. dont get me wrong, theyre adorable, but like with a story baseline of ml saving kid mc in the past and having that one good deed ultimately keeping him relatively sane for a few years, the author shouldve known how to properly swerve it from a possible found family tag into romance.. because godamnit i cant help but perceive the ml as somewhat of a father figure to the mc.. and does the ml even actually love the mc for who he is? not just as someone who paved a way into the normalcy hes always dreamed of, but just as HIM yknow? like no guys trust me i really do see the vision of it happening but the buildup was so asscheeks that we didnt get proper transitions in between the major plot events, which led to a seemingly half assed manhwa with art that has so much potential it just hurts.. MAN this wouldve been a favorite of mine if it was actually taken seriously by the author..
i keep coming back to this like an obsessed ex PRAYING that by some miracle there would be side stories... this was so perfect please im begging for more of these two :(
okay okay im gonna be completely honest here!! when i started reading this i fell in LOVE with the concept and trope, i thought i had stumbled across a gold mine.. until i kept reading, and lwk the build up kinda sucked.. it felt like a narusasu age gap crack fic in the worst way possible. dont get me wrong, theyre adorable, but like with a story baseline of ml saving kid mc in the past and having that one good deed ultimately keeping him relatively sane for a few years, the author shouldve known how to properly swerve it from a possible found family tag into romance.. because godamnit i cant help but perceive the ml as somewhat of a father figure to the mc.. and does the ml even actually love the mc for who he is? not just as someone who paved a way into the normalcy hes always dreamed of, but just as HIM yknow? like no guys trust me i really do see the vision of it happening but the buildup was so asscheeks that we didnt get proper transitions in between the major plot events, which led to a seemingly half assed manhwa with art that has so much potential it just hurts.. MAN this wouldve been a favorite of mine if it was actually taken seriously by the author..
Couldn’t have said it any better!
Read the other work by this author, i promise it's worth it