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honestly...
I kinda love that jarn loves them both, it's very human of him. (asides that he never got rest bc of them,) it was becoming apparent to me that jarn couldn't choose just one, since he has the both of them in his heart. I dont like either of them that much, but seeing as how much jarn affected them it makes sense. it makes me sad that we couldn't see more of the aunt, but it does feel like some plot points were rushed.
also, I found it beautiful that fenrir made himself jarns heart

I was shocked when I saw the reviews after rereading this story on this site. I love this story, its sweet and its about two people who love and grow together. its a very sweet read for me since their love is so requited, that it never felt like a power imbalance or too quick (which is common in short stories.)
the visuals are beautiful, I love this artstyle and it makes me pause on each panel. I do admit that their appearances change as the story continues, but it is not in the way that excuses calling it "shotacon" (yuck).
I've dropped BL for this reason before, because some artists really do make them look a LOT younger than they did in the first chapter.
In this case, I didnt feel like our ML(? mc?) made a dramatic change from first chapter to the last chapter. Yes he got more boyish (?idk how else to call it), but I think the artist was only trying to show his naivety and purity. plus, as the story goes on, its common for the artist to find familiarity with their story and for little things to change compared to the first chapter.
I really liked this story, so maybe my judgement is skewed. but I usually go into stories blind, so maybe other readers came into this with the same expectations as the reviews. I dunno, maybe cuz I read regas (HIGHLY RECOMMEND), that his appearance doesnt phase me.

a detail I noticed while reading is that whenever a character is reserved/upset, their face is always blocked, covered, or its out of frame. its such a nice detail that improves the story by a large margin.
I cannot wait for the next update tot

I just feel bad for the both of them, like they really liked each other as kids and then they presented, changing their perception of how the future would look for them. still, I hope they get together and are happy T.T

phewww, I was so freaking worried for a sec
Anyway, he's just sobbing away and drinking, it makes me sad as well.

If im gonna be honest, I dont even care if they dont get together
this story is so intriguing that it leaves me in awe with its theme and visuals. The message it tells to the audience is rare, and I appreciate that they are both unreliable narrators. this story is so well done

I love that our mc has so much rizz... he charms everyone he meets, his boyfriend has to keep an eye on him lol!