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Jiwre0-sixveb-hesxaj April 26, 2026 5:31 pm

I’ve been reading the novel (currently around chapter 400) and i have kind of mixed feelings about Yuder and Kishar.
I love slowburn and a strong plot, and I really like the worldbuilding so far.

I love Yuder and his relationships with the other characters, especially Enon, which I’m really curious to read more about.

But when it comes to the intimate scenes between Yuder and Kishar, it just feels weird maybe? I’m kind of annoyed at myself that I don’t feel it, because the slowburn and their dialogue are actually really good. So why do I feel like this?

I don’t really feel the chemistry, and those scenes sometimes seems a bit awkward. Its not in a “it’s on purpose” way, it just feels awkward to me.

I’ve been wondering why I feel like this? One thought I had is whether it could be the writing style. Sometimes it feels a bit overly “purple, flowery prose.” I can follow everything just fine and the writing is good, but sometimes it might be a bit too much for me. I mean yea it’s very beautiful, but still…

English is not my first language, but I don’t think that’s the reason

i’m also wondering if it could be because the novel is originally written in Korean, and the translation into English can feel a bit off when trying to keep the tone, but i have no idea

Maybe it’s just a “me thing,” I don’t know. I can see all the elements are there, which is why it’s kind of frustrating that I don’t feel it.
So I’m just curious how others experienced it. Did it click for you at some point, or did anyone feel something similar? But either way I can really see why people love this story so much!

    StarGirl April 26, 2026 11:38 pm

    Maybe because it is awkward ¯_(ツ)_/¯ It didn't feel awkward to me but I was in awe at how beautiful and emotional their first time was. But that's just my opinion. Once you get to later chapters their flow gets stronger, even more physical. Kishar is a mega green flag so he will always prioritize Yoder's comfort and safety above all else but as they get closer they do become more hotter. But this is just the opinion of one crazy fan of the novel. I hope you keep reading

Jiwre0-sixveb-hesxaj March 30, 2026 1:42 pm

Is there a novel for this?

    Coriander March 30, 2026 5:39 pm

    Yes and it is one of if not the best BL novel I’ve read. The plot and world building is insane. And their relationship is so beautiful. Its is slow burn but if you read it you would not feel so at all. You can search for the novel on novel update

    Yaoi_lover March 31, 2026 7:36 pm

    Its on novel updates or novel lingua! (Idk who got more chaps tho but nothing are amazing website)

    Yaoi_lover March 31, 2026 7:36 pm
    Its on novel updates or novel lingua! (Idk who got more chaps tho but nothing are amazing website) Yaoi_lover

    NOTHING?? I MEAN BOTH!

    Jiwre0-sixveb-hesxaj April 11, 2026 2:42 pm
    Yes and it is one of if not the best BL novel I’ve read. The plot and world building is insane. And their relationship is so beautiful. Its is slow burn but if you read it you would not feel so at all. You ca... Coriander

    Thank you! i’ll get to reading hope the manhwa picks up soon

    Jiwre0-sixveb-hesxaj April 11, 2026 2:42 pm
    Its on novel updates or novel lingua! (Idk who got more chaps tho but nothing are amazing website) Yaoi_lover

    Thank you i found it

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