The “trapped in the closet” part was a little too on the nose for me there’s ways to show without telling, especially if your using a metaphor that’s really popular. Showing a visual of a door opening or being trapped might get the point across without coming across as corny or on the nose. I can’t speak for others, but I personally don’t love to be slapped across the face with themes.
Absolute garbo BL gets rated 9.5+ but this is juuuust over 9? Crazyyyy. This story is so damn good.
right? this is Kimi No Na Wa's bl version and I absolutely love both
I’m a sucker for an enemies to lovers story and this scratched that itch perfectly. The ending was so abrupt though, that’s my only criticism. I want more!! I know there’s a novel, but it’s not at my library or local bookstore and I can’t find it online (other than samples). Sad daysssss
Too toxic tbh and I feel like the ending would’ve been healthier and more realistic if they went their separate ways.
I understand leaving things like senpai or fika since it was supposed to be in another language but why wouldn’t you translate gomena or daisuke? Also the choice to provide an t/n for those words BUT NOT OREMO? I had no idea what that meant!! Just translate it!! If you’re gonna go through the effort to provide the note anyways. Also, “sankyu”??? They said thank you!!! We don’t need you to write it out phonetically
Not enough love in the comments for the orange couple !!! Despite being first they and the green are my faves
Still confused why he was CONVINCED it was the prosecutors baby… he had sex with them both unprotected
It's a common trope in a/b/o where the couple is convinced they can only have a baby if they knotted and I don't think Heowoon knotted Yoonwoo. They also didn't have sex during either one's heat/rut. Yoonwoo was in heat the first time he had sex with Soohyeon though.
Thank you! I only recently started reading abo
Translation wasn’t great but despite that the pacing is just bad in general. Why is he so surprised about a kiss when he was thinking about doing it with a guy that same night? Some of it just straight up contradicts other panels