beta
Love the art and the smut. Love the way ml talked mc through it in chap 1 and his teasing side. As much as I was looking forward to this, the story feels way too disjointed and too short. I love the premise and their dynamic. The mc being anxious leading to him to confine ml and ml being a loving teasing freak who willingly got drugged to reassure him. Matching each others freak perfectly and all. I need this to be a longer with scenes more fleshed out and I really really need that cake scene and the ribbon scenarios ml thought of in chap 1 (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
It’s not bad, like I can get where some people are coming from with the dubcon/rape but it’s not that bad. Yes ml jerks him off while he’s sleeping but that’s the more tame situation in these types of plots. I wanted it to be at least a little longer so I can see their dynamic after sleeping together and maybe more smut. I do like the hand stuff so give me more of that