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First chapter he uses commands on what’s his face without consent, and goes even further with it and SAs him. AND RHEN WHEN THAT STUDENT DOES IT SUDDENLY ITS SOMETHING DEPLORABLE and he freaks the fuck out, but ONLY because he did it to Yuito. It’s giving “only I’m allowed to force you to do things you don’t wanna”Even ignoring that the story is shit, I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone. I’m starved for sub/domverse but I’m not this desperate
Personally I didn’t like it. The first few chapters were okay, the plot was strong, the pacing wasn’t bad, and the characters seemed to have had clear reasoning/motivators. However, I noticed that those aspects eventually started to fade after time. Around the 30th chapter it began to go downhill. The pacing was off, many things were not explained, randomly added, ignored, or just brushed off. The end also kind of pissed me off, bc what do you mean ex boyfriend just up and decided to be completely okay with him moving on when the entire time he was obviously resentful and a controlling/jealous person (even while he was alive)?? It makes no sense. The author also occasionally added new characters for a moment and then took them away bc they no longer served a purpose (buff guy’s brother, buff guy’s friend, older dudes friends, the neighbor lady, etc). I was really upset when I finished reading it bc all the comments were glowing about how amazing and life changing and scary it was. IT WAS NONE OF TJOSE THINGS. IT WASNT SCARY IN THE SLIGHTEST AND I KEPT ON WAITING FOR IT TO GET SCARY BUT IT NEVER DID. Anyways, it was ass and felt very unrevised and poorly thought out. It had a lot of potential too.
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