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Personally I didn’t like it. The first few chapters were okay, the plot was strong, the pacing wasn’t bad, and the characters seemed to have had clear reasoning/motivators. However, I noticed that those aspects eventually started to fade after time. Around the 30th chapter it began to go downhill. The pacing was off, many things were not explained, randomly added, ignored, or just brushed off. The end also kind of pissed me off, bc what do you mean ex boyfriend just up and decided to be completely okay with him moving on when the entire time he was obviously resentful and a controlling/jealous person (even while he was alive)?? It makes no sense. The author also occasionally added new characters for a moment and then took them away bc they no longer served a purpose (buff guy’s brother, buff guy’s friend, older dudes friends, the neighbor lady, etc). I was really upset when I finished reading it bc all the comments were glowing about how amazing and life changing and scary it was. IT WAS NONE OF TJOSE THINGS. IT WASNT SCARY IN THE SLIGHTEST AND I KEPT ON WAITING FOR IT TO GET SCARY BUT IT NEVER DID. Anyways, it was ass and felt very unrevised and poorly thought out. It had a lot of potential too.

First chapter he uses commands on what’s his face without consent, and goes even further with it and SAs him. AND RHEN WHEN THAT STUDENT DOES IT SUDDENLY ITS SOMETHING DEPLORABLE and he freaks the fuck out, but ONLY because he did it to Yuito. It’s giving “only I’m allowed to force you to do things you don’t wanna”Even ignoring that the story is shit, I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone. I’m starved for sub/domverse but I’m not this desperate

I’m sorry, the story is pretty normal for a single volume yaoi but the age gap is just way too much. I started reading without having read the summary, so I was super surprised when it was a freshly 18 year old and a 30 year old man. Its especially odd when the 30 year old asks him to dress in his high school uniform. They are cute as a couple, but the power difference that comes with age just makes it kind of gross. Also their first meeting the older guy immediately kisses him without warning or any signs the guy would be okay with that. Also the top mentions a couple times how he likes his partners young, in fact he loves it. It doesn’t help that the bottom is pretty lanky (which is pretty normal for a teenager), and also looks really young. As an almost 18 year old myself I cannot imagine how predatory it would find it if a 30 year old was after me, especially if I was just trying to do my job. The whole age gap situation seems totally avoidable and not at all relevant to the plot, the author seems to have simply added it to fulfill some gross fantasy of a borderline crime. The bottom can’t even fucking drink alcohol, he is not an adult by any means. Even ignoring the age gap it feels like the top is just excessively pushy in his advances, specifically regarding their first meeting.

I started the manga with high hopes bc of the reviews and overall good score but the first real interaction between the love interests is rape. Also both the top and the bottom are so incredibly irritating and lowkey misogynistic