"Our start was a bit rocky"
Wdym OUR start, this straight up was a story about Dan getting only hurt over and over again and now the end is written as if this was a romance story about two characters who had a hard time accepting love (in 3 fucking eps)
Literallyyyy, it’s so unsatisfying. The author probably wanted to wrap it up and it’s okay, but then maybe it would have been better to move things forward from when jjk got drunk or Kim Dan got drunk, I feel the torture was unhelpfully long and all the other arcs which should have gone before the ending aren’t there, yk?
Yeah totally, I get it. I would also like to have seen Jjk realized everything and suffer from all the stuff he had done to Kim Dan a bit longer or maybe Kim Dan should have once not given in - would have been nice to see that he doesn't always say yes to everything, cause now the love feels insincere from him, because he would have said yes anyway
Yeah, exactly, this had much more potential initially. I read Bj Alex some years ago and didn’t really liked it, from what I remember, the characters weren’t very likeable, but still the story was at least built with an intent and brought on until the end. I liked Jinx much more, but it feels like there was an idea that was lost midway through yk. It’s not only unsatisfying, but I feel it incomplete
I loved the story at the beginning and the idea behind it is great, BUT I feel like somewhere in the story the writer lost the goal
Also at some point it just felt like it was repeating itsself. Someone is mad -> throwback to 6 years in the past -> sexual tension but no solution to the problem
The art style is great, their interactions are great the sexual scenes are awesome (/^v^)/ - but the plot doesn't flow smoothly and questions stay unanswered