ALDS's Topics (7)

I liked Thie better than Tyer

Idk if it’s because I’ve been into Villainess stories but I would love to make one of Karina’s perspective, with the story slightly altered cause I feel like everyone is too intensely one sided , and how the Prince duke and emperor feel forced because of ohh she resembles the late empress, idk feels too much forced. But I like the potential it hasss, I might just remake a story similar to this

I heard this will have a harem ughh I’ll probably drop once it gets to that point :(

Ah gosh this story was good!! Ughh I feel bad for Lillian thru out the story, like gosh imagine thinking she’s the fake daughter all along and then realizing that she actually was like what a crazy roller coaster of emotions. I feel like the story should have been a little longer tho, sometimes the relationship didn’t feel very genuine cause there wasn’t enough moments to where th relationships could build. But everything else was pretty nice!! Like Lillian had a lot of imposter syndrome which I understood and lowkey kinda didn’t understand why Swan wouldn’t just tell Lillian that she was the real daughter, and I didn’t really understand why swan would look like a mix of the dad and mom. Like she wasn’t even the real daughter, I feel like it would make more sense for her to look like the mom if it changes appearance, just cause it’s the mom’s divine energy. Like while reading it without reading any spoilers, I thought the whole time they were twins (Lillian and Swan) and especially when Lillian’s eyes look just like the dad when she became an adult, and her hair was just a genetic thing (like from distant relative) cause it can happen I had it where a friend had blue eyes and blond from her grandmother when her parents and aunts and uncles had brown hair and eyes. Plus they still didn’t explain how she even ended at the Orphanage or how the temple was able to change that one girl’s appearance. It wasn’t very clear to me, maybe I missed something but those things kinda throw me off while reading the story, but otherwise I loved this story!! Super angsty, I was rooting for Theo and Lillian so glad they ended up together, kinda felt like Swan and Lillian could have ended up together too tho I see some romance happening there. But yeah honestly don’t feel too bad for Damien tho, like knowing his backstory was interesting at the end but ughh I feel like if they took some more time to flesh out all the side characters like Damien, the dad, heck even Theodore, I feel like I’d feel more sympathetic for these characters, especially when we don’t even see clearly what happens to Damien!! but I’m still happy about th story ending!! And interested in more of the authors work

Ughh some of the actions don’t make sense to me like maybe because I have a def judgement but ughh how some of the characters act feels so frustrating I feel like th author is purposefully dumbing down some of the characters especially Peri to make the story more dramatic. Which didn’t really bother me cause the story was still interesting but omggg, the Black hair and red eye guy pisses me off so bad. Like maybe the author did a good job! But I hate how forceful he is, even if it’s good intentions, I can kinda tell he’s probably trying to get Peri back to her rightful place and with support of the Exers but I just hate his guts, like the way he treats her. Like no matter how bad his past is or his reasons if good, he sucks so bad that I genuinely hope Peri won’t make up with any of her blood related family, that she just actually leaves everyone even the white hair guy (probs ML). Peri should just end up with the Holy empire and stay with them. Cause even tho her blood related family genuinely care and I don’t find them unredeemable, but still just don’t see them being together at all bc of that stupid Hoestin guy. But I do hope Peri gets revenge and Sam with the family too on who killed the Mom, she is lowkey the most interesting character so far!! The story is so still interesting! So will read but ugh just that black haired guy makes me so mad(╯°Д °)╯╧╧

So uhhh ended Chp 46 it’s alright I see why some ppl don’t like the art style change I don’t mind it, lowkey better then most , I just don’t like how they change certain hairstyles like the American girl why did they unbraid her hair- an I don’t like how sexualized the younger girls are made to be, like at least in the old style they look 14-15 and like no chance of romance for the mc, but with the new one it looks like it’s gonna turn into a harem or all the girls liking him romantic wise and he’s just gonna fall in love with the one girl that he loved in us past live. But idk the story is decent so far gonna stay for the rest

Lowkey I kinda like this story so far, I like how the FL (Ophelia) doesn’t get stuck on that mindset that th story will go exactly like how she read it and her thought process isn’t stuck on one thing like other stories I read where they think the ML will love someone else when she changed so much of the story, and how she takes the OG FL’s actions but for a decently valid reason, same with the OG FL I like how she’s not entirely evil like in other stories where they basically just swap roles, to me personally the progress is very realistic and I kinda like the internal relationship in this one too, it doesn’t feel too exaggerated with how each characters respect others and how they grow to like Ophelia feels a bit more natural. Same with how she makes th OG ML (Crown prince) fall in love with her, it makes sense, then like compared to other stories where if it was the other pov it would be like they were cast under a curse or something. The her meeting important characters feel kinda like plot armor but still a good story overall!! And excited to see how the rest plus out! Honestly just curious of how her and Feur will develop, same with the Crown prince and Second Prince (it lowkey feels like they all will fall in love with Ophelia, with ofc Sylester being the ML) buttt Idk how it’d end. But this one is def a decent balance of FL not being too bland or like driven but the plot it just plain out taking the OG FL’s place, which I enjoy. So excited to see how this story goes!!