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This story is great; the idea of having the mc search for their sister and the lengths they go for this is impressive. Also the dynamics between the characters is fine; personally a Netter fan even if he wasn’t the kindest of the group. ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
This story falls off a bit at the end imo, or it’s the fact that from chapter 55 and onwards the chapters don’t seem to be complete? （￣へ￣）
I feel like the story glossed over the fact that her secret got revealed, and most the characters don’t seem to care one bit? I’d expect at least the male crew members who had her seem them fully to atleast say something, idk man.
No reaction makes no sense given those ideas, like atleast with Netter, he actually gets annoyed but then after understanding her story and such he decides to let her off.
(Which is in character for him)
Also the romance in this ain’t great ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Won’t talk about the novel here; but the story here is around 25 chapters into the novel, there’s over a hundred for reference as of now ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
I’m so excited to see how the story develops
Give me some spoilers
Do you still have the novel
It’s on Wappad of all things; just search the title and you’ll find it. (Also I’m not spoiling stuff here!) ლ(´ڡ`ლ)