This story is great; the idea of having the mc search for their sister and the lengths they go for this is impressive. Also the dynamics between the characters is fine; personally a Netter fan even if he wasn’t the kindest of the group. ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
This story falls off a bit at the end imo, or it’s the fact that from chapter 55 and onwards the chapters don’t seem to be complete? （￣へ￣）
I feel like the story glossed over the fact that her secret got revealed, and most the characters don’t seem to care one bit? I’d expect at least the male crew members who had her seem them fully to atleast say something, idk man.
No reaction makes no sense given those ideas, like atleast with Netter, he actually gets annoyed but then after understanding her story and such he decides to let her off.
(Which is in character for him)
Also the romance in this ain’t great ╮(￣▽￣)╭
She’s seen enough differences in the plot especially with the og fl to assume that SHES changing stuff. How is this even a question anymore? Like you’d think with the prince showing clear interest in her that she’d figure it out considering that she’s meant to be insanely intelligent?!? (⊙…⊙ )
She’s so done for; gl trying to deal with a tyrant Σ( ￣□￣||)
(︶︿︶)＝凸 take that ring back, would say some shit about the charm curse being to blame if they both weren’t twisted beforehand clearly .
Roger the GOAT
get a man who will treat you like a princess and do EVERYTHING he can to prioritise your wellbeing… ok not like the other mls more so in a genuine manner ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Picking the one guy that actually cared for her and didn’t just want her as a trophy… looking at you Jason!
The Crown Prince is the worst; like we have the abuse of political power and the abuse of divine power all together.
The High Priest is awful too; however just a tiny bit better (the difference is a penny’s worth)
Eris got the best ending she could considering the shitty people she had to deal with. Can’t help but smile at her fighting and winning back her autonomy.
I feel like the witches are there not only to have the convenient magic but you could consider the Salem Trials and how those woman were killed as they gained power and autonomy in the form of land and wealth… yes I think using legitimate power carries that same message; where the witches could represent this. ITS A STRETCH THO IM AWARE ╮(￣▽￣)╭
The art in this is stunning, but the mc has been put through atrocious situations.
Yeah I want to pretend that Mako has a sweet guy who’s trying to earn his heart and all.
I genuinely can’t root for this guy because his way of helping Mako is always by sleeping with him or doing sexual things, this happens quite a bit, wonder if this will be explored as a flaw tho. (￣∇￣")
As an example, Mako does get raped by his ‘ex?’ and the idea that our ml has is to sleep with him? Like right after comforting him a bit. I just feel like that the thing a person would want to do the least, especially when they feel vulnerable and used. ╥﹏╥
Wait are we seeing BOTH POVs?!? That’s sickkkk.
Plus we can learn about both MCs
Won’t talk about the novel here; but the story here is around 25 chapters into the novel, there’s over a hundred for reference as of now ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
I’m so excited to see how the story develops
Give me some spoilers
Do you still have the novel
It’s on Wappad of all things; just search the title and you’ll find it. (Also I’m not spoiling stuff here!) ლ(´ڡ`ლ)