Tbh I hope atleast one of his family dies, bc mc has everything he wants? All other characters atleast one or all family died just his are alive. Thats kinda bullshit
I get it. Don't agree, but I get it. I don't think he's been sufficiently arrogant or conceited or presumptuous to warrant that in the story. No need to rob someone who is struggling to overcome and actually does, even with help.
The times that get annoying are when the MC is naive or stupid and just presumes everything will always be fine and never faces consequences for that. This MC isn't like that.
I don't have anything against him and I would 100% feel bad if something did happen to his family but the Mc is definition of Mary Sue. Nothing ever bad happens to him directly and if it does it is always somehow solved, I love against maybe thats why I feel this way but come on atleast kill off one of his family members to that it is fair. Not only are all of them overpowered but they are also all alive?! Make it make senes
Sorry to spoiled this (its just what I remember, correct me if I'm wrong fellow novel reader), but about him 'Nothing ever bad happens to him directly and if it does it is always somehow solved'.. On his other selve(other timeline) he doesn't have that OP skill and he struggled a lot to survive..
About your comment 'atleast kill off one of his family members to that it is fair', I know its unfair(for them being OP and complete family), but its their life we are talking about, its not like a game where if you die, you can revived/repeat/reset or anything else.. They are in the middle of apocalypse, survival to the finest and death is everywhere,.. Give them some credit, they didn't misused their OP and they use it for the betterment of everyone.. Just like what uncle Ben of Spiderman, "With great power comes great responsibility"..
The resentment of the unsuccessful towards the successful is a real thing. It's not psychotic to have the thought as a comment on the story. Mary sues break immersion and suspension of disbelief. We want our MCs to face hardship and overcome it, and when they don't seem to overcome the same suffering or setback as everyone around them, yet remain above them, Tue story is a little disconnecting.
I don't think that's the care for this story specifically, but abstractly it's reasonable story critique.
A Mary Sue by by definition is someone who always just so happens to have the right tools to fix a situation without any rhythm or reason. They usually just have it even before the story starts. Like someone needs to break into a high security prison. The Mary Sue would probably be like " i learned how to break into things through my mentor which I have never mentioned before this point and will never mention again". That is not the MC.
There are definitely reasons that all his family are alive and it is being heavily forshadowe that they are special. Like the dad isn't exactly op as the rest cuz he isn't blood related. His power comes from the mom. It's definitely a blood line thing.
It's not like everything has an immediate and convenient decision. It's not like there are no consequences for his actions.
That's not character building that's just trauma for the sake of trauma. Maybe try reading what "Mary Sue" Actually is before labeling a character. Sure he might not suffer like the rest who lost their family but is it really necessary to kill off HIS family? Why must you add another burden to him just so his suffering can be "Fair"? That's not fairness. That's just unnecessarily piling trauma onto a character because you think he hasn't suffered enough.
Ugh I don't even have fear from spiders but big ass spiders that eat you are so distasteful and for now it looks interesting? I love stories where they build up kingdoms but I hope they won't go in goblin slayer and other classics goblin stories direction. I don't won't poor women get raped and I hope mc won't allow that shit bc its really distasteful to see also I hope there is no harm where women just throw themselves at him
He knows that character like him usually get softer after sometime? Like they soften up and start to relay on his companions, than his demon side or bad past comes hunting him again so with power of his companions he overcomes it.
I wouldn't say Inquisitor is annoying, she is just a child that doesn't know anything put church and what she been taught. Even tho most priest don't have that much of pure faith and must are carpeted(i think i spelled that right) she still kept her innocence like other hero protagonist while the story continues it will be testing her. I swear shitting on her for something most Shonen male protagonist have in common is just stupid. It just shows that you are illiterate, its such a obvious and common trope.
Both of them are blank sloth for players to take, just tropes but bc protagonist ended up somehow in a game I assume they had been filled up with real humans that fit the tropes they are.











Some people are really dumb like he was just told that blue dragons and very against anti justice and than this dude jump over the line
And cursing up a storm at a children’s theme park hahaha
Oh yea that too ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍