beta
The story had potential but it was rushed. I also think that the son's character is not well written, like wdym he was supposed to get revenge on his father and his "lover" but the moment he saw the mc he changed his perspective? Like his entire personality changed. I'll give this a 5/10 bcus I really like the art, especially the way they drew smoke, it's very eye catching.
Tooth rotting fluff and smutt , but can we talk about the yaoi hands? It's so distracting to see hands twice the size of the characters face