this artist always make mc open his mouth but no words coming out very awkwardly i know he was js breathing wtv but its so wide that its look awkward and with this every cliffhanginh too like i know every story got one sinc eits not the end but this story has to be the most annoying chapter end and its killing mee
Im saying facts and you can literally see it yourself.if anything i rlly like the art style and character design.im saying how they draw "out of breath"scene is so weird awkward and the mouth open too wide maybe lack of breathing effects wtv.and i havent say anything bad bout cliff hanging chapter all i said was it was always end when it's about to be interesting just way to make reader continue.
the art little bit different but anyways I KNOW he got weird ass taste but man i am not ready for that panel where he lick the hell out of hari foot like omg that look gross MAN IDK ITS FEEL LIKE SOME PERVERT IT SCARED ME I rlly wanna know what will happen nextnext like the story is so catchy i wanna know how maximus gonna pull hari out and when will that brown hair guy gonna beg wtvwtv
It feels like the uncle and mc's father got something going on lah i dont wanna think this way but it js feel like uncle rlly tried to get the kid tgt since they cant be tgt? like use kid refer as them like how we imagine us being in our fantasy and even their phone wallpaper is so suspiciously like a couple/used to be and they haven't talk for years and still have eachother as their phone wallpaper???.back to the main couple I dont mind they having sex often since its animal wtvwtv I understand why haeil did that but its kinda and its feel like its dragging stuff i thought its gonna end in only 2 ss but the story got no progress its cute yes but hm. and i feel 5050 with the "go to the sea/live tgt in the sea"wtvwtv it sure romantic but if he serious then mc should make him know since mc understand that haeil is js kid in big body so shouldnt the first thing is to teach him human stuffy?
"dane doesn't deserve grayson" or "Grayson doesn't deserve dane" what so ever it js bullshit cus at the end of the day both of them dont deserve eachother both of them have so different mindset both of them r red flag even how much you defend them but js because they don't deserve eachother doesn't mean they cant be tgt.both of them got problems and also some good stuff too but it doesn't excuse for their action especially dane rape grayson/try to kidnap and etctetc. anyways grayson seriously cant keep his mouth shut man i mean i know Human have lot of curiosity but girl this chapter feel short tho
We're moving too fast and this is so stupid,ML is so stupid mc is also stupid ah the potential is so high but the 4ears situation is still hunting me.anywayssss i dont like the 4ears its do silly stupid, i dont like how things r moving especially when they make ML seems like the first who like mc but suddenly he js "we're family" bitch youre the first to show that you like him and want to mate with him but now you suddenly change? man and the chapter 7+8 the placing/conversation is so weird not natural and pure stupid i keep saying stupid man i js cant take it TT but like the suddenly make mc says "spend your heat with me"or wtv is so something else? cus imo mc is supposed to be mature/keep secret until very end of the wall unless no way out.it js feel like suddenly character personalities changed alot










we still not escaped from smuty and WHAT THE HELL idk if its that omega thibg coming out of his hole or it js sweat but it doesn't seems like it hm wtvman im fine either way i rlly wanna know how thing will go especially if MC FOUND OUT THE TRUTH about his friends is the person who planned kidnapped scene js because