the concept of open to enjoy smut instead have to sit up and read the story cus what the hell
the sex is hot but the plot is too confusing for oneshot story like whats the point of making 2ver of them when at the end of rhe day they r still same face? and we didnt even get to see the actual love interested fucking too? i understand they tryna make something but its not as great i thought we gonna get the actual love interested/couple instead of fuckbuddy thingy like its gonna be surprised that they used to one nightstand at the end. i know one short story it doesn't have to make sense for ending but it doesn't mean u can js put wtvwtv in. it js more like author want to do actor x rock so i dont understand whats the Point of making the relationship confusing when ure not even gonna make scene where they're finally tgt.what do i expect from oneshot sighsigh the cover/art look promising b4 yall jump me theres lot of oneshot that smuty but still good better ending/plot. (is the weird relationship suppose to make the story longer?)
imo the relationship graph thingy is js trash it doesn't explain everything/the actual thingy one who's fucking with actor till is his manager ivan who got a match with him but he js dress up as someone else so till couldnt recognise him even if its control c control v,from the story we can tell? that both of the ivan wouldnt accept doing with someone else even if identical face and from his personality that clingy too and rock ivan seems like he doesn't know actor till also the overprotective and sus thing that ivan do at the end lead to no cheating on love interested
author want to make thing unique for one shot but the concept doesn't fit one short story the lack of "thought" of ivan scene/the weird relationship but in the end it doesn't explain anything at all
happy yes boring yes.no context just" hey, i know u like sweet (giggles)".i was like "hm, meh".its not bad not good either suddenly all angst chapters feel better than this ending.no continue about red head guy,no nothin about why/where taesung gone,no scene of the old man regrets stuff the father/mother back tgt is kinda cute tho if I didnt get the name wrong but thats it? super rush why not make angst rush instead of make rush ending? not making long chapters js to make rush ending is wow.it feel so weird that taesung suddenly appeared like okay i was happy but man it was so nof cute not sweet not sad either just something like no long line? lit after disappeared? just "i know you like sweet" and oh nou its so disappointed lah i have highhope for this ss ending cus i dont hate this ss plot wtv but the ending left lot question mark. what happened between taesungs parents? what happened to red head? is the old man regret everything and finally understand? what is taesung planned?where even r they living now? idk if i missed the place in the story they r living cus i dong remember.it js tons of questions mark. i give it 6/10 ending ruin it for me it could have been better. and the sudden make taesung rape haebom too its so weird meh
oh nou i already sense the stupidity words and thoughts in the next chapter when its so obvious.hyung smell gay ppl around yea?
what the hell.its like they're so lazy so let js put and solve every bunch of stupid thing in one chapter.they both tryna guilt tripping/gaslighting eachother out in one scene and suddenly its about holehole put in sex like man what the hell and the random situation that pinkishwhite idk hair color scene is js meh no context no nothin no further conversation or at least make him like a n
second lead tryna get mc? but nothin ah js nothing.man they r so stupid as if bit neck is big of a thing especially hes js a human said u didn't say anything as if hes not drunk and already blackout
awh its so cute and all the art is very give mature vibe that sex scene doesn't feel that exciting no hate tho, i love how the art really give them mature vibe when they r actually old the face the head shape everything but when its about rhe emotion when they tryna show it they js didn't do it that well it js feel like a cold like an ice and hard liek brick especially sex scene other were okay the moles on mc is so eyes catching tho idk why its bothering me but not either
"im worried i would make it harder for him" bitch ive never thought i would say this to taesung but man "i know u cant live w/o me" girl whats the point and i dont get why they didn't explain anything more or at least taesung appearance? or js tell haebom he will be disappear for a while until situation is aight.i still dont get the points of red head i mean im like in the middle with him but the black pink hair girl is kinda random like whats the point of giving her screen time when she doesn't rlly give alot and make haebom suffer after suffer is so something else especially it could be the meeting of them instead wtv that is and taesung is not that stupid to not know how much haebom love and want him by his side but still? not fantasy story not good enough to kill ownlife either, even tho i dont think hes dead i still brubru.
wtv man even how much i despise hyung i cant deny what he said is true lah and if u wouldnt let anyone talk bad about ur relationship? oh girl good that it js fictional like bfr u know damn well that ur relationship is a mess and still say as if its okay just how stupid u r and that hyung give every word every sign at the end and still not figure out like i thought ur smart.if u r real ppl i wouldn't get close to u ah it was weird asf and i doubt there gonna be anyone supporting ur relationship irl even how cute u two r.
oka here r finally 4some but man js how much i hate the word "please" when having sex it feel weird and when he say like 3 full name of them then please make it weirder im crine
i love hyung alot while they were being a kid and fighting hyung was like so sweety so romantic omg auraaura more scenes pls but its almost end of side
NOOOU, im lowk here expect cutesy little boys back story mc help him out wtvwtv not seeing kid fighting eachother/that ass father doing that to little cute kid too like hes so cute with that hair cut lah now we understand why he call leader ha not name cus when hes a kid he got call "a dog".im sad,i dont wanna see young mc fight or wtv its so something