Me everytime i feel sorry for the alpha bro : wait... but he deserve this Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)
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If his partner is another submissive omega like mc, I doubt he will act like this now ( ̄へ ̄)
Uke rejected twinkification and turn hot instead
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Uke toloool what the fuck are you doing putting up with this shit for 10 years, you fucking idiot??? And you’re STILL trying to be nice to that piece of shit alpha???
Bitch, you weren’t just raped, you were treated like you weren’t even human for TEN FUCKING YEARS. And you’re still out here feeling sorry for that trash???
No matter how traumatized someone is, how the fuck do you have not a single ounce of self-respect left??? Even prostitutes have self-respect. Even people who have to dig through trash to survive still have some dignity left. And you??? What the actual fuck???
And now you’re acting all concerned about that piece of shit alpha, offering to help him like, “What am I supposed to do for you?” Bitch, WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU MEAN, WHAT ARE YOU SUPPOSED TO DO???
I’m losing my fucking mind. You are so goddamn stupid, I swear to fucking God.
This is the first time I’ve genuinely felt like throwing up while eating my indomie over an ML’s behavior. I know there are other scumbag MLs just as bad as him, but for some reason, this one makes me feel so much worse.
Maybe it’s because I’ve actually watched the MC fight tooth and nail to hold on to his dignity, only to keep getting humiliated and treated like shit because he’s poor. Fuck.
You know how Ilay Caesar and Zhenya are always branded as black flags? This ML literally has the worst traits of all three combined. He genuinely has psychopathic tendencies
The uke is so damn stupid it genuinely makes me sick. Too stupid, too dense. GOD.
I swear, BL authors make it so damn hard to find a genuinely interesting character or plot. I’ve seen this same shit way too many times. If the character isn’t dense as hell, the author drags out a misunderstanding for 40 chapters. Or they make the character so emotionally constipated that he can’t seem to feel ANYTHING.
Like… Why.....?
Apa sih ni putih2 gila??
Udah sono lu ajak tu alpha tolol ke pulau terpencil hidup berdua!!
Mc aja bisa melahirkan sama ngerawat anak disana, kembar pula.
JANGAN CENGENG BANGSAT
My gentleman uke is the one who take the seme's hand for marriage(▰˘◡˘▰)
I read through everything and had fun with it, but it kinda lost me halfway through. At some point the Mc and the ml didn’t make that much sense to me in terms of their actions/ feelings? The Mc was very clear on not wanting to sleep with the ml and disliking his attraction to him etc and then suddenly after fighting of the coyotes he’s asking the ml if he would sleep with him?
In the same way the change on the side of the ml doesn’t rlly make a lot of sense to me? Just because the Mc did not force himself on the ml (or tried to) he is now suddenly someone the ml feels comfortable with? Idk it just lost some incongruity imo, which made it less appealing.
I feel like the switch between the leads being strangers/not on good terms to them becoming lovers wasn’t that well executed. It felt like quite a sudden switch. The Mc should have needed way longer to develop feelings … considering how horrendous the ml was. Him being pretty really shouldn’t excuse that much. And the ml should have also needed way more reassurance/ time, with all of his trauma etc.
I would give it a 7/10 - comparable to a decent warm dish that you eat, when you’re hungry. It fill you up, does the job and tastes quite good in the beginning, but the more you eat the blander the taste gets.
Yes, he didn’t want to mark him because he wanted to protect him. And then what? He’s still a fucking jerk. He fools around with other omegas and treats him like shit, not because he’s trying to protect him, but because he’s bored with him and has lost the spark in their relationship. What protection? Bullshit.
He even forced him to abort the baby just because he thought it belonged to another alpha??????? And he just stood there watching him covered in blood right in front of his eyes like that???? I’m losing my fucking mind.
And after ALL THAT, they still get back together?????
What’s wrong with this author??
This ml is so trash so that i think it's okay with the spider even tho he's not the best either but alas he still much more better than the falcon. And i feel sorry for the young lion. He has better compatibility, he treat him much better too. But sadly the author isn't on their right mind
Thank God my sibling ain't a piece of trash like that. Wow. Just wow. You’re incredibly toxic. You hogged all the parental attention, and now that you're fine, you don't feel a damn ounce of guilt toward your little bro? Instead, you wanna rob him blind?? What a total scumbag.
The hell was your mom craving when she had you, you absolute bastard?
Sajun, why do you keep bringing up your exes and fuckbuddies? It is completely exhausting and deeply annoying. Even a total stranger would find it irritating, so imagine how much worse it must feel for someone who’s actually yearning for you (eventho ml still hasn't realized it) ( ̄へ ̄)
Little jeonsu remind me of little naruto... ╥﹏╥ if only his mother still alive like jeonsu's mother...
It’s really a time skip, guys. But don’t worry, if I remember correctly, there’s another child besides Aiden. All their kids look like Owen, none of them look like their alpha father. And he literally upset about it, not because he dislikes how they look, but because they’re so beautiful like owen that he’s genuinely worried about them (/TДT)/
Asel is seriously testing my patience( ̄へ ̄)
Why is he always so easily swayed by that damned alpha? Just tell him you want to abort the baby already! I NEED to see how that bastard would react if he actually thought he was going to lose the child
And why is the story turning out like this…? Why is everything suddenly going so smoothly and effortlessly? Everything is just falling into place way too easily ಥ_ಥ
I hate Jihwan for how twisted he is, but I can’t sympathize with Sooyoung as much as I do with other victims in similar situations because this man is literally a disaster magnet. He keeps making me worry about what kind of trouble he’s going to get himself into next. ╥﹏╥
I really wish Sooyoung could be more cunning, though. Like, maybe he could play along a little more, act more obedient, make Jihwan feel like his provider, and even seduce him to let his guard down…
It’s not like he has to genuinely submit to Jihwan. He just needs to be smart enough to manipulate the situation to his advantage. Unfortunately, Sooyoung is way too prideful for that.
Just act for a bit for your smooth escape sooyoung...
Nevertheless… when you think about it, all this man really needs is a traditional wife who’s obedient and loves him unconditionally, and in return, he’ll do all the work, provide for them, and take care of them.
And Sooyoung just isn’t that kind of person. He’s a man with his own dreams, desires, and pride. They’re simply incompatible
Aghhhhh jungseo how mature of youu ╥﹏╥
You're the real top uke (/TДT)/
Finally ╥﹏╥
Author please take care of your health.. you keep updating fast splendidly ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~
I can't wait for them to runaway together... ╥﹏╥ maybe both of you can find job opportunities in australia whv maybe? Or ausbildung in germany? ╥﹏╥
If you guys were the MC, would you really be able to trust them…? I mean, they’re an alpha and an omega. Wouldn’t it be inevitable that, over time, they’d start developing a deeper bond with each other? Now that they’ve accepted each other with the MC’s help… what if they accidentally form that bond again years down the line?
I know neither seme can live without the MC, and they’re all in this relationship together, but what if the bond between the two semes eventually becomes something more special simply because they’re an alpha and an omega?



















