I don’t know how to feel about this because it’s like there’s always such a switch up with heavy topics and subjects turning super light hearted and it’s like pick one especially since in the last chapter he literally raped him and it was treated like nothing!
yes!!! pick a tone and stick with it. don't just brush over big things.
it's also kind of a skill issue to handle that switch back and forth. ouroboros had a lot of changes of mood, but they reflected the protagonist's mental state and the story was more introspective and treated the topic of rape and how it impacts a person seriously to begin with.
Idk yall the top kinda pmo like I completely understand that he has trauma in his past and stuff but like I feel like he got this full coarse meal buff bottom and he’s just being greedy and ungrateful likeee I feel like he’s just a little to mean to him when the bottoms proven to him time and time again he isn’t like that, I still think they’re cute! And I’m sure I’ll come around to him











Beautiful work gimme 10 more